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Topic: anger and aftershave
bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Tue 05/06/08 04:13 PM
I’ve seen the menace and the motif in your grimace in your hairpiece your not so strange even for a stranger your aftershave doesn’t mask the anger in your smile when you bare teeth when your denial brings no relief your aftershave doesn’t mask your anger and your not so strange even for a stranger

EtherealEmbers Joined Sun 02/03/08 Posts: 6580	Tue 05/06/08 04:16 PM


bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Tue 05/06/08 04:27 PM
thank you ember

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 05/06/08 04:48 PM
I like this male version of this just as well as the woman version you wrote awhile back! (See- I really read and remember! )

bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Tue 05/06/08 05:06 PM
I like this male version of this just as well as the woman version you wrote awhile back! (See- I really read and remember! ) thank you teddy i like to rework my poems im glad you enjoy them

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 05/07/08 12:53 AM
Fun read.

bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 05/07/08 01:07 AM
Fun read. thanks glad you liked it

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 05/07/08 02:39 AM
Nice write...

bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 05/07/08 04:36 PM
Nice write... thanks

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