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Topic: Fire Lust
Gaia_Moonchilde Joined Thu 05/01/08 Posts: 307	Mon 05/05/08 05:20 AM
Burning flames Passion consuming Licking teasingly at flesh Singeing as it kisses thine lips Sweat dripping causing flame to sizzle Crackle and pop, desires growing ever hot Intertwined burning as one Smoldering gently Becoming ash Wind blows softly Lust spent as if it never was

livelife68 Joined Sun 12/30/07 Posts: 3696	Mon 05/05/08 05:38 AM
Love everything you've written

kk35695 Joined Fri 03/21/08 Posts: 1924	Mon 05/05/08 05:55 AM
...........nice.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 05/05/08 06:25 AM
Very nice...you have the true feeling of desire in that one. Well done.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 05/05/08 07:28 AM

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