Topic: Another word for Hate
d4tc's photo
Sun 05/04/08 11:53 PM
The smell of Sunday's sacrilege
Sprayed hate on empty walls

Religious traditions bludgeoned by
The flaps of discriminative jaws

Motivated hatred forms
all men in disbelief

Temple worshipers sigh by this
Collapsed on weary knees

Angry Arms
Stretch out in prayer

An open sky lit
By the edging flames flare

Traces of sand found
Tween boulder-bearing eyes

Evil makers prey upon
Destruction and demise

Corruption floods ears and mouth
Behind bars made out of prison

Wretched minds will take the time
Persuading a good vision

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 05/04/08 11:56 PM
drinker drinker drinker

Gaia_Moonchilde's photo
Mon 05/05/08 12:04 AM
So vivid..intense...excellent writing

Knightime's photo
Mon 05/05/08 12:06 AM
you got this right aint it the truth drinker

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Mon 05/05/08 04:55 AM
drinker Superb writedrinker :smile:

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 05/05/08 04:58 AM
Aww getting better and better.flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 05/05/08 07:04 AM
Good write! flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Mon 05/05/08 08:30 AM
Very intense J. Nicely done flowerforyou :heart:

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 05/05/08 10:56 AM
((((Jason))))flowerforyou

Your scope of topics amazes me! Never know what's next and is always a wonderful surprise!

Well done and honest as always!flowerforyou