Topic: In My Small Hands
Gaia_Moonchilde's photo
Sat 05/03/08 11:10 PM
In my small hands I hold a rainbow
With just a breath it is blown
Across the sky, arcing gracefully
Shimmering its brilliant hues

In my small hands I hold destiny
With just a breath it is scattered
Across time, through space
Falling where it may

In my small hands I hold time
With just a breath it ceases to exist
It just slips away
Dissipating like mist

In my small hands I hold life
With just a breath it is born
Small, fragile, crying softly
I cradle it close, protecting it from all harm




openheart45's photo
Sat 05/03/08 11:11 PM
so awsome n great writing:smile: flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sat 05/03/08 11:12 PM

In my small hands I hold a rainbow
With just a breath it is blown
Across the sky, arcing gracefully
Shimmering its brilliant hues

In my small hands I hold destiny
With just a breath it is scattered
Across time, through space
Falling where it may

In my small hands I hold time
With just a breath it ceases to exist
It just slips away
Dissipating like mist

In my small hands I hold life
With just a breath it is born
Small, fragile, crying softly
I cradle it close, protecting it from all harm






Beautiful flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 05/03/08 11:15 PM
:smile: drinker

kc0003's photo
Sat 05/03/08 11:20 PM
well done


flowerforyou

transientmind's photo
Sat 05/03/08 11:22 PM
Evocative, I love it.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 05/04/08 07:21 AM
flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 05/04/08 09:11 AM
That was very lovely.. a beautiful poem..flowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Sun 05/04/08 09:29 AM
I love this piece Gaia. Ty for such a beautiful write. flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Mon 05/05/08 05:44 AM

I love this piece Gaia. Ty for such a beautiful write. flowerforyou


She is definitely talented.. this one deserves to be brought back up..

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 05/05/08 06:30 AM
Very well descriptive. Very talented.

In your small hands, you hold our attention.