Topic: Home..
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Thu 02/01/07 02:39 AM
Frightened and alone
She wanders looking for her home
Through the years never finding
Stumbling and falling
Through the maze
Days upon unending days
Always taking the wrong path
Until one day..
She stumbled upon a new way
Each step growing more sure
Walking onward
Never looking back
Path becoming clearer and clearer
Getting ever nearer to her home
No longer frightened and alone
No longer stumbling and falling
The maze simply a road
The road to home...

catchme_ifucan's photo
Thu 02/01/07 03:09 AM
like the vail was lifted that covered your soul....
your words show it more each day!!
a true wordsmith!!

karmafury's photo
Thu 02/01/07 03:15 AM
Keep following that road Poet.
Very well written.:smile:

Gryphyn's photo
Thu 02/01/07 07:45 AM
I am happy to see this path you are on these days. Its much brighter in
the sunshine and its easier to dream upon a star.

:)

G

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 02/01/07 08:08 AM
Home is where the heart is after all...Find your place girl! You deserve
it so much!:smile:

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 02/01/07 08:34 AM
Hummmm your getting there g/f that road may seem
long, but in reality it is only a short way.

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Thu 02/01/07 10:14 AM
"Home", a word that we all dream about getting back to- i like to say it
is where i left a big piece of my heart. This poem of urs
ChubbyCherubPoet is a great one! Keep them coming...;)

DANE1973's photo
Thu 02/01/07 10:23 AM
It's odd but I don't really feel where I live is "home"anymore..Good
poem CCPhappy

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Thu 02/01/07 01:31 PM
very pretty :smile:

Morena350's photo
Thu 02/01/07 09:16 PM
this is only the beginning girly!! your on your way CCP