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Topic: Empty Dreams
ShadesofGray07 Joined Wed 04/30/08 Posts: 15	Wed 04/30/08 03:02 AM
Reality turns to dreams, Dreams turn to dust, And I lie here fading, Like the last rays of sunlight Drifting into dusk. I feel the emptiness Close in around me, Soft like a blanket. I cover myself In things that will never be. Eyes shut To the world around me, I am blind to reality, Afraid to see That all I’ve worked for, All I’ve dreamed, Is broken, Empty, There is only me.

Sexyklp4U Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 3377	Wed 04/30/08 03:03 AM


Max_Darkling Joined Sat 03/29/08 Posts: 1166	Wed 04/30/08 03:11 AM
I like your style this is a very well written poem

ShadesofGray07 Joined Wed 04/30/08 Posts: 15	Wed 04/30/08 03:17 AM
I like your style this is a very well written poem thanks! i do my best writing when i'm sad. lol

boneyjoe Joined Sun 12/09/07 Posts: 6196	Wed 04/30/08 03:20 AM
nice

bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 04/30/08 03:25 AM
very descriptive put me right there very good

ShadesofGray07 Joined Wed 04/30/08 Posts: 15	Wed 04/30/08 03:46 AM
thanks so much everyone!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 04/30/08 08:20 AM
I like!

rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Wed 04/30/08 08:24 AM


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