Topic: softest touch
michael1313's photo
Mon 01/29/07 03:49 PM
Sat 01/27/07 01:35 AM
The Days go by and years roll on,
I sit and wonder are good years gone,
I sit and ponder thinking alone,
and look around this big empty home,
memories of friends,parties we had,
pictures of kids,Mom and my Dad,
my sterio T.V. and CD's from yuppies,
and the side of a chair,chewed from puppies,
I think I'm alone,but it's not so,
there's a presence here I really know,
some how I just don't want her to go,
she floats like a cloud her spirit I see,
drifting around,quietly looking at me,
whispering sounds like tiny bells song,
whispering of sunsets as she drifts along,
telling of love on a passionate night,
spelling her love in her dreamy flight,
yelling her passion to this dreaming Knight,
whispering sounds was all I could hear,
whispering sounds as she shed her tear,
she faded away before my soft touch,
how I longed to feel it so much,
I saw her once more,hand to her lips,
she blew me a kiss from her finger tips,
then she vanished into the night,
I knew then,she had kissed me alright,
soft as a butterfly,
as it's fluttering by,
her soft kiss,was a kiss goodbye,

Lonely Soul smokin

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Mon 01/29/07 05:46 PM
Tugged at my heartstrings for sure. Sad, yet beautiful in its own way.

karmafury's photo
Mon 01/29/07 05:51 PM
This one's a keeper Mike. Real good.

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/29/07 05:52 PM
Thanx SCG...this was in another poem,by mistake...

so I posted it alone...glad you liked itsmokin

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/29/07 05:55 PM
Thank You Karma...thanx for readingsmokin

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/29/07 05:56 PM
That was really beautiful really enjoyed this one!!flowerforyou

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Mon 01/29/07 06:02 PM
Really beautiful

michael1313's photo
Mon 01/29/07 06:13 PM
REALLY?laugh

Thank You all for reading...smokin

no photo
Mon 01/29/07 07:12 PM
You got such a way of telling a beautiful dream this one is
awesomeflowerforyou

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Mon 01/29/07 07:17 PM
awe this is one for the books

venusrose's photo
Mon 01/29/07 10:20 PM
Haunting! A lover's presence so close, but still not within reach.
Great poem.

Cybear's photo
Tue 01/30/07 05:47 AM
Fantastic;Michael.When we sit and ponder,it is then we are overcome by
these fantasies and hauntings of such bitter but sweet desire.I truly
can relate for I equally am driven by such powerful thoughts.Perhaps we
should cherish such imagination for it fuels and drives our hope and
allows us to never succumb to defeat.I luv this Poem very much
Michael.Thank You!Godspeed!Cybear. happy

Gryphyn's photo
Tue 01/30/07 05:58 AM
I can remember feeling this way, It does change Michael. Dreams are what
drive us to make it better. Good one

:)
G

terisa's photo
Tue 01/30/07 06:24 AM
michael...one day hopefully it wont just be a dream or a
prescense......loved this poem..it too would make a great song....keep
writing michael

michael1313's photo
Tue 01/30/07 11:54 AM
Thank You all for reading...
this was more than just a thought or dream...
it did happen,but a few years ago...

I took notes,and put them into this poem...

Thanx again for readingsmokin

evangeline's photo
Tue 01/30/07 11:57 AM
Loved your poem It relates to me in so many ways,hope you find that your
dream becomes real.

redmange420's photo
Tue 01/30/07 12:08 PM
Pardon the language cuz, but this was f*ckin great dude!!

michael1313's photo
Tue 01/30/07 12:09 PM
my dreams are still haunted by this delicate one,
from time to time,she visits me...
but only for a moment...

and I wake in a cold sweat...smokin