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I love your lips, I love your smile
I love how you display your cleavage with style I love your ears and how they listen I love your eyes, I love their vision I love your cheeks, both front and back I love that curve down your back through your crack I love your nose it’s oh so cute I love you in your birthday suit I love your fingers intertwined between mine I love how you moan when I massage up your spine I love you when your arm lies across my chest I love to suck on both of your breasts I love how you cringe when I lick your ear lobes I love how you shiver in my arms when you are cold I love how our naked flesh connects warming up our bodies I love everything about you, that’s why you’re my hottie! [This is an old, outdated poem I wrote. It would be more appropraite now if I added ED to most of the words. I just didn't want to take away from it's authenticity.] |
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Very sweet and endearing.
i love....."I love your eyes, I love their vision" wonderful words and sentiment. |
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Thanks for the comments.
Especially yours AngelLight. It is much appreciated being that I am a big fan of your poetry which is always clear, soft, and superbly written. |
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Edited by
d4tc
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Tue 04/29/08 01:18 PM
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I'm going to borrow a line from your poem to post here one of my own hope you don't mind...
I love your lips, I love your smile Together with mine let them stay a while I love to see US, you and me God's will this love will always be I love all of you yes everything This love of ours much joy it brings Nice write Jason! |
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That was a good poetic reply. I didn't mind at all.
It was not BAD like another poem I read today. LOL! |
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nice write
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