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Topic: broken heart
Queene123 Joined Tue 06/26/07 Posts: 17056	Sun 04/27/08 10:57 PM
how you have broken my heart and that i shall never forget, you made me cry, as where my sorrow turned to hate, as you may perhaps be a little young not to understand what pur love is all about, feeling that your heart was ripped out, as where you had though he/she was the best, as where the truth lies down to rest, so now its time for you to move on and look forward and forget the past, as where all im feeling is my head spinning without a doubt.

Wolfshado Joined Thu 11/22/07 Posts: 841	Sun 04/27/08 10:59 PM
wow

ltlone43 Joined Sat 04/26/08 Posts: 82	Sun 04/27/08 11:02 PM
Dang...I could have used those line a few weeks ago! That was good!!

codelockbox Joined Mon 12/31/07 Posts: 1237	Sun 04/27/08 11:07 PM
Very nice thanks

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sun 04/27/08 11:12 PM


2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/28/08 05:39 AM
That is a most excellent poem Queen.. thank you for sharing it with us..

Snoman1951 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 5731	Mon 04/28/08 05:44 AM

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