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I stand upon my lonely shore
I look out over the waves I hear them crash upon the rocks below me i feel the surf upon my skin I wonder how i came to be hear alone,afraid,insignificant I wonder what i ever did to deserve this isolation As I feel the tears run down my cheeks As i feel my heart almost seem to crack I clench my soul against the pain I steel myself against the hurt I realize this is only temporary I realize I will live again i will love again i will BE again |
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Ice that's beautiful and touching. You won't be alone for long.
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may your words shine into your life,
to warm your heart as they have mine... very nice Princess... |
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Ice, that was truly beautiful and touching, I do agree with Karma.
Patience sweetie, you and I know that these kinds of stuff take patience. |
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Thanks Karma we shall see.
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Fine unfortunatly god forgot to bless me with that virtue.LOL
Micheal thanks I'm glad you liked it darling. |
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Ice, sweetie, that is why sometimes we have to learn it the hard way.
Remember, I have a month and 1 week to go. |
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Iknow I know he's been trying to teach me over the last year. can we
tell him i got the picture already. |
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Ice that was very heartfelt and I know right
were your coming from even tho all say with patience and time it will happen well actually I have about ran out of the patience and ready to give up on the time lol. |
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never give up!
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there right don't give up I know keep up the good work
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Ice, that was really beautiful
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And that you shall,for as long as hope and faith are maintained,then we
shall Be Again!,and we will prevail.May God hold us gently and guide us with his mercy for all our days upon this Earth.Godspeed!Cybear. |
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Great poem Sis, it's about time you started writing again and this time
don't ever let anyone or anything prevent u from doing it again. |
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Thats really nice darling i hope to see you post some more.
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Yes you will. Very nice. Looking forward to reading more of your
poetry. |
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