Topic: A ROSE | |
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A DROP OR TWO FEEL FROM THE SKY
LANDED BESIDE ME AND CAUGHT MY EYE SANK IN THE GROUND WITH ALL IT'S GRACE NOT TO BE FOUND , NOT EVEN A TRACE SOON A ROSE GREW UP FROM THE GROUND A THING OF BEAUTY I HAVE FOUND NURTURED IT WELL SO IT WOULD GROW NOT TO FAST , YET NOT TO SLOW WHEN IT GREW UP I BROUGHT IT INSIDE TO CHERISH FOREVER AND NOT TO HIDE SO PROUD OF MY ROSE IT REMINDS ME OF YOU KEEP IT FOREVER AND SOON THERE,LL BE TWO IT WILL BE LIKE OUR LOVE IN EVERY WAY LAST FOREVER ,IT WILL ALWAYS STAY MY LITTLE ROSE IS JUST LIKE YOU KEEPS ME SMILING WHEN I AM BLUE THIS ROSE IS LIKE MY LOVE FOR YOU STARTED AS ONE , AND THERE WAS TWO MY LOVE FOR YOU IS LIKE THIS ROSE LAST FOREVER AND GROWS AND GROWS |
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nice work!
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thank you i try
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not bad New Bee...
nice poem Brutis... BUT NEXT TIME COULD YOU SAY IT A LIL' LOUDER??? lol,just picking on ya dude... just that it looks like you're yellin' at me |
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I copied and paste fro my documents that's why , sorry but I will fix
the problem |
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hey don't worry about it...by th way...
did you read mine about a rose? "Passion Flower"...dusted it off for you... |
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good one!
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Yes I did awsome man we could start a rose book
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Hello just got up from bed .How's everone doing?
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that's good...first i've read from you nice work
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Nice Work,,, Thanks
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Hey brutis that was great,you know my name is Rose so I gotta love
it,Good Work!! |
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I have to thank you all . It is response like that that keeps me writing
cause I never thought I had it in me Thank you evey one |
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Well done...very, very nice! Thanks for sharing.
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Brutis...
poetry is in us all... keep writing,please! |
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thanks micheal but I need a brake the people I wrote this abuot have
past on after 62 years together |
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hey man i read your peom and it touched my heart so why have you not
posted any more peoms |
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Sweet poem. Nice that it was dusted off and brought back to the top.
Great read. And touching. |
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