Topic: here is a new song i just wrote
antisteroidsx's photo
Wed 04/23/08 07:19 PM
dreaming reflections of you
verse1 on this pillow i can still

smell u

my lips still taste u

my eyes still see u

my heart still wants u

close to me[so close to me]

i can see why we are apart

our hearts cant work as two



but i still miss u

so i hold this place for u

here in this room

till then

dreaming reflections of u

v2 in this room our

love is still alive

here is where i held u

and there i kissed u goodnight

here is where we loved

like there was no tomorrow

tomorrow will come

and my heart will

still want u

but i know what i

must do

i must miss u

so i hold this place for u

here in this room

till then dreaming reflections of u



provehito in altium


Corrupted's photo
Wed 04/23/08 07:33 PM
I like it :smile:

rush2001's photo
Wed 04/23/08 07:36 PM
:smile: Very nice.

antisteroidsx's photo
Wed 04/23/08 09:15 PM
thank u both

antisteroidsx's photo
Sun 04/27/08 02:49 PM
Edited by antisteroidsx on Sun 04/27/08 02:52 PM
i did not just write this but
i did just add to it




what do you think?


find a way
to the world i speak

can u hear me?

to my deamons

i repeat no more[no more]

at times silence can speak

so loud

whispers in the dark

but you cant hear a sound

but listen

oh listen

for these words

when u cant hear a sound

chours:let it all just settle

down and find its place

dont try and change it make it fit cause there is a reason for it

but you will find a way

yeah a way



verse 2:in the dark where u hide

are they all closing in

detrmined to down you



by sorrow through sin

dont let them drown you

dont let them pull u in

chrous..







provehito in altium





chorus