Topic: Journey of a Tear
lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:30 AM
I challenged Den with this poem a little while ago and this is my version. Hope you all like it.


I start down deep
Within a beating heart
Then something happens
And my journey starts

I have no possessions
So there's nothing to pack
Once I'm gone
I can never go back

My first stop
Is that lump in your throat
I can't help making
Your voice drop a note

I linger there
Just for a bit
My friends shortly follow
And there we'll sit

Moving on up
I've found a colored orb
I'm just going to be
More than you can absorb

Dancing there
Making your nose run
Glimmering and sparkling
There in the sun

Now I fall down
From your eye
I'm sorry dear
I've made you cry

Now on your cheek
I leave a trail
My journey near over
I'm feeling frail

There I slide
Onto your chin
From whence I came
Others begin

My demise is on
The front of your shirt
The journey of a tear
Hope it has some worth

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:34 AM
The journey our tears take as they clean the soul within.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:34 AM
:cry: Now you got me cryin,,,, Goshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh darnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn emotional rollercoaster of life,,,
((( Vicki ))) I will walk with you,, hold you,,, in silence I will catch your tears,, embrase them and return to you a smile,, a warm shoulder ,,,,

Love you :heart:

LAMom's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:35 AM
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm me thinks this Texas lady is followin me, bigsmile

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:37 AM
I love you both so deeply! Thank you for being there to lift me up when I need it most!:heart: :heart:

codelockbox's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:45 AM
Very nice poem. :smile:

LAMom's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:49 AM
Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh me lovely,, Now go on with ya bad self,, Walks off singin I am women hear me roar,,,,,,, Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo to you :heart:

no photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:50 AM
I live with no fear.
That every little tear.
That runs down my cheek.
Will meet its peek.
And let my eyes dry.
So everytime that you cry.
Its just your hearts cry to try.
To save every tear that slides on by.
To gain it back with-in your mind.
And keep it there for you to find.
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Nice POEM, little sister....tears will always ,,,,,be.:heart:



TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:51 AM

Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh me lovely,, Now go on with ya bad self,, Walks off singin I am women hear me roar,,,,,,, Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo to you :heart:



Ohhhhhhhhh and we do ROAR very loud indeed......bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Tue 04/22/08 10:52 AM


Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh me lovely,, Now go on with ya bad self,, Walks off singin I am women hear me roar,,,,,,, Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo to you :heart:



Ohhhhhhhhh and we do ROAR very loud indeed......bigsmile


Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ya we do,, Hmmmmmmmmmmm me thinks we lost the Sand Lady,,, Sheshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh gotta go get me truck,,, come on I will need your rope bigsmile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 04/22/08 11:55 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

(((Vicki)))

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 04/22/08 12:54 PM
First of all, I'd like to say to those two, Denise and Kristi, ya'll are wonderful. You crack me up.

Terry the love you have for her is like another brother. Peace be with you.

Everyone else, thanks for your support for her.

Now on to my say,

When you feel the flood
Of something welling up,
Let them flow down
That trail of sup.
It's a way of release
To let your emotion flow,
That trail of tears
Just let them go.

Letting go is so easy to say, but it is within my heart I've found, it releases all that weighs heavy on your heart. Will always be here....

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 04/23/08 09:34 AM
I love each and every one of you!!!:heart: :heart: :heart:

Let me tell you
these tears I cry
are just my soul
letting out a sigh

I feel pain
and happiness too
sometimes I even
cry for you

I let them fall
down in a flood
don't worry all
they're not of blood

Tears are God's way
of softening the soul
they somehow make us
complete and whole

nightruler's photo
Wed 04/23/08 09:35 AM
amazing

LAMom's photo
Wed 04/23/08 09:35 AM

I love each and every one of you!!!:heart: :heart: :heart:

Let me tell you
these tears I cry
are just my soul
letting out a sigh

I feel pain
and happiness too
sometimes I even
cry for you

I let them fall
down in a flood
don't worry all
they're not of blood

Tears are God's way
of softening the soul
they somehow make us
complete and whole


:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 04/23/08 09:39 AM
(((((JT)))))flowerforyou Missing you my friend!

(((((MOM))))):heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: