Topic: Seek not my heart
Dopey180's photo
Sun 04/20/08 09:32 PM
Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies,
Do not you hear my heartfelt cries?

Below the branches, here about,
Do not you sense my fear and doubt?
Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams,
Do not you hear my woeful screams?

Upon the meadows, touched with dew,
Do not you see my hearts a'skew?
Beneath the thousand twinkling stars,
Do not you feel my jagged scars?

Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze,
For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.

It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
It's drifting o're the gentle rain,
A symbol of my silent pain.

It's buried 'neath the meadow fair,
Conjoined with all the sorrow there.
It's lost among the stars this night,
Too far to ease my quiet fright.

No gentle winds, seek not my heart,
For simply ... it has torn apart.


EarthSprite's photo
Sun 04/20/08 09:56 PM
Dopey...flowerforyou

What a moving poem...
It is like you saw right into my soul..

Hugs to you...flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 04/21/08 12:38 AM
That was beautiful...heart and soul searching. Good job

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 04/21/08 06:18 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Mon 04/21/08 06:19 AM
flowerforyou very nice

Dopey180's photo
Mon 04/21/08 12:53 PM
flowerforyou Thank you all I can only write what I feel and see and most of all of my poems is what I am feeling every day.

Hugs and flowerforyou for all of you who like my writtings.

kc0003's photo
Mon 04/21/08 12:58 PM
well done

flowerforyou