Topic: Empty
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Tue 01/23/07 11:10 PM
Sitting in the quiet stillness
Listening to the world around me
Feeling a complete emptiness
Fighting the pain within me
The sky is smiling
The trees are laughing
Inside i'm dying
I can't hear their laughter

DANE1973's photo
Tue 01/23/07 11:26 PM
frown I feel your loneliness.

METRA's photo
Tue 01/23/07 11:30 PM
IT DO FEEL BAD WHEN U DON'T HAVE NOONE TO CHARED A SMILE,BUT IT FEEL
WORSE WHEN U ARE ALL ALONE.

Cybear's photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:01 AM
This is so painful because you see,and feel such beauty around
you,however this beauty has died internally because it is being
overwhelmed and shrouded by abject loneliness.This was the driving
force behind my poem 2 days ago"My Mysterious Lover"I can relate
hon,Trust Me!Godspeed!Cybear.sad