Topic: You saved me | |
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Take my hand and look into my eyes,
Look deep within past the lies. Past the mask, past the smile, And when you get there please stay a while. Imagine you're part of me, inside try to see, Take your soul and hide inside of me. An open door within my heart is there for you, Can you see inside there's a little window too. Walk along my veins of love, my veins of pain, Get to my heart and stand still again. Look through the window, through the broken frame, Try to see the girl that will never be the same. A deep crimson red running through, My heart is there it's open to you. Peer in a little further until you see, A little girl hiding she looks just like me. In the corner hiding from the world outside, Her skin is transparent you can see inside. The story of her life plays right there, It's like a script on her skin all you can do is stare. There are words engraved and each scar holds a quote, Just look closely and read the things she wrote. "Nobody can see this part of me, Nobody can hear my silent plea." "A little girl lost so deep inside, Can"t you see the way I hide?" "Each scar holds a story never to be told, Watch my lips read the secrets they hold." "A life so hidden, a life so torn, How was this much pain ever born." "Look at the red in my eyes can you see how sore, There's no tears left there anymore." But now watch slowly as something surrounds her empty shell, It drains from within her a life full of hell. A soft pink colour creeping in, Covering the things she kept so deep within. Her eyes once blue with no twinkle start to change, The scars on her skin start to move and rearrange. They join together and cling to her heart, Making a new quote to stop her world from falling apart. Watch and see how they emerge like stitching a new soul, Just a simple thing but it seems to make her whole. It covers the cracks that formed in her heart so deep, Covers them up to let no more pain seep. Now look closely as the letters begin to show, So tiny and perfect forming a row. "She Loves You" is what it spells out, Now with it stitched to her heart soul there's no doubt. Can you see, she's beginning to stand tall, Her eyes glow and she's not about to fall. Little stars fall around her like fairy dust, New wishes surround her with so much to trust. She sees you watching and the moment she does you see, Pure white wings form to set her free. No longer just a shell, she can have a fresh start, With these new words engraved within her heart. Now take a step back and walk along my vein, You see how its changed pain won't walk here again. Once again you're looking into my eyes, But it's truth you see and no more lies. That little girl was me, The angel you set free. Inside you could see everything I was hiding, To move on I just needed somebody to confide in. And as I look into your eyes I swear I can see, Just how much your love is growing for me. Now when you look in to mine there'll be no more silent cries, No more broken dreams or given up tries. When you look from now on and take my hand, I hope so much that you understand. With all of my unbroken heart I hope you see, You are the one that saved me. |
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Superb write & deeply heartfelt.I Luv'd it very much sweetheart.Godspeed!Cy
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Superb write & deeply heartfelt.I Luv'd it very much sweetheart.Godspeed!Cy Thank you, that means a lot to me. |
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GREAT JOB,,
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very, very nicely done
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...I love a romantic edgy Aries writer that puts it out there...excellent job~~~
~wicked~ |
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Yessssss!
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...I love a romantic edgy Aries writer that puts it out there...excellent job~~~ ~wicked~ Thank you, Thank you. This is actually something I have just gone thru, so it means a lot to me that you all like it. |
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