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Every time I see you,
You’re putting things in bags; White, plastic, annoyingly clingy (Flashback on ex-wife -- Those words, those terms -- But that’s not nice) The Tylenols go Next to the frozen meat loaf Next to the paper towels Next to the next to the next to the But it really doesn’t matter Do it any way you like Just let me soak up the you that you do The voice, the look, the inner sense That you are the only one That this one could ever dream of A circle -- The spitting image (?) Of the image that spit On me, so many years ago But you weren’t there; You’ll never know Of the eons in between You just go on pressing buttons And handing back change With a dizzying smile Tomorrow I’ll see you I’ll have frozen pizza next time And I’ll soak up your sun As you put things in bags.... |
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And how do we begin to covet, Clarice? ... -Silence of the Lambs |
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Edited by
LAMom
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Tue 04/15/08 11:15 AM
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Lex
Masterful,,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh My Dear,,, I got your book in the mail yesturday,, I started reading it at 3 in the afternoon I am at chapter 22,, and still goin,,, I am in awe,,, and await for the next one to be on the shelves,,,, Bravo Mr Wonderful,, Bravo |
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Applauding here, ((((Lex)))) very good indeed!!
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Awww Lex loved it humm sound like someone likes the check
out girl |
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awesome!!!
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Neat Write!!! ((((Lex))))
Ok- don't buy anything you don't need... |
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Neat Write!!! ((((Lex)))) Ok- don't buy anything you don't need... "Shop 'til you drop!" Satan says.... |
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Just a customer, with groceries in hand,
But the way you looked mismerized me, and you with no wedding band. Smiling brightly and glancing my way. Beautiful this lady. That waited on me today. I wish she could think of me As a guy she'd like to SEE. Lex, So many times man. I have been here and feeling the maybe,,but always inside feeling ,,no way.. she'd only shoot me down. So I'd leave, thinking back in my mind to a time and place she could have been mine.. Your poem took me to your place, I even seen the same smile on her face.......GREAT JOB, my friend.... |
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Just a lonely library clerk
Often see too many jerks (I'm writing this at work) Some nights I hope for a second glance That maybe someone would give me a chance Would you like to check out a romance? But I have to be professional all the while Even when I'm floored by your smile Ready to melt into a mushy pile Sometimes it's the other way around And the person waiting on you is on shaky ground Admiring you without a sound (Hi all, my roommate told me I just had to check out the writing forum and I'm glad I did. Hope you got a laugh out of my goofy rhymes.) |
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Hello Pamela is your roomate 7Kate7 ?
very nicely done Welcome to JSH... |
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