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Topic: Just off the top of my head....
wickedlluccy Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 1040	Mon 04/14/08 05:39 PM
Who is this man I do not know Who is he and will he soon go He says that not to worry so He says that this is meant to grow I like this man for he makes me laugh I like this man, tells me where he’s at Of special things we talk and laugh Of special things we want to have He writes to me and makes me see He writes & fills my heart with glee I’ll try to make him proud of me I’ll try to help him, help me see Trust not misplaced will be a gem Trust not misplaced when placed with him Thank you sun and moon and stars Thank you for giving me whats yours He must have fallen from the sky He must have come to make me fly They gave him up to me how grand They gave him up to be a man I’m sure his fellow stars are quite amiss I’m sure to have givin this greatest gift I think that I shall tell them so Hey you all up there, way to go !!! ~wicked~

jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Mon 04/14/08 05:41 PM
Very nice

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Mon 04/14/08 05:41 PM
Sweeeet!!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 04/14/08 05:43 PM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 04/14/08 05:48 PM
Sounds to me like you can now see, See him, feel him, just you and he. I ask myself alot,,,,,,,"WHAT ABOUT ME"????...lol Great poem,,,

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Mon 04/14/08 05:49 PM
Awesome write

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 04/14/08 06:14 PM
"He must have fallen from the sky He must have come to make me fly" That's great Perhaps you should post this in the other forum. Afterall, the OP was asking for love stories

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/14/08 08:06 PM
Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~Wicked~

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 04/15/08 06:14 AM
awesome write

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Tue 04/15/08 07:05 AM
That was really nice wicked...cute too.

wickedlluccy Joined Mon 02/04/08 Posts: 1040	Tue 04/15/08 07:11 AM
.........thankyou my family of new friends, if my love story were to travel no farther than what I know today...it would be none the less extraordinary...and finding him here amongst you all has been the treasure hunt of a lifetime.... ~wicked~

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 04/15/08 07:23 AM
.........thankyou my family of new friends, if my love story were to travel no farther than what I know today...it would be none the less extraordinary...and finding him here amongst you all has been the treasure hunt of a lifetime.... ~wicked~ awww wonderful

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Tue 04/15/08 08:26 AM
Great write!!!

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