Partly inspired by my own prompt in the inspiration thread, and partly inspired by my dreams.



Again you return to me?
Only for your face to be forgotten again, no doubt.
Why does the sun's light so clog my memories of you?
I know vaugaries.
Dark hair, kind face, and a beautiful soul.
But, brown eyes or green eyes or blue eyes
the details escape me.
Do you taunt me good sir?
To be so kind as to give me directions
through the maze of my own dreams,
yet you cannot bear to be with me in daylight?
Will I ever meet you?
You, who have captivated my mind and soul,
the one I wake yearning to know?
Your name changes sometimes,
but always you come back to me,
when I least expect it,
something rare these days...
do you fear that someday, some detail will stick with me?
That I'll pick you out of a crowd,
and you'll have to fullfill those things
you whispered to me in the depths of dreams?

... Do you dream of me?
Have I captured your mind,
as much as you have ensared mine?
Will there ever be a time, I'll remember your responses?
I don't know.

But...
Here you are in front of me again,
so close,
so far.
At least my soul feels near to you...
Let us wander 'cross the beaches of my dreamscape
you and I.

My perpective retreats,
and I see you there,
in perfect detail, which I try to capture,
like capturing smoke in a butterfly net,
... I start to forget,
and you walk away smiling...
Walking barefoot through my dreams again.

I think I want to re-title this...

"Rant to a Dream Man"

Sorry!U can't do that.The orig.title is now etched into our brains & archived inside the internet 4 all eternity.

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Goooooooooood Write!!!

Haha, Yes, but my new title post mabobber is also archived for all eternity... "Man in my dream" could merely be a subject, while "Rant to a Dream Man" is the real working title.



Also, thank you very much MsTeddyBear2u, you always have something nice to say.

Quite wonderful me Lady

nice

good to see around

Interesting and nice..Good write...