Save me from this mental crime
Hate rules my life sublime
I know not what you will find
Only memories that do blind
My soul to fate that I've sealed
Only wish to be repealed
Will you take the time for me?
Only darkness do I see
Waiting for your distant love
Coming from the skies above
Wishing you're here with me right now
Feelings seem to fail somehow
Come to me and throw the vine
Of ressurection for my line
I write this lyric for your heart
This anguish tears my soul apart
Cannot reach the edge of life
My only wish you end this strife
Boiling deep inside my head
Only stops if I am bled
Without your love I am to blame
Crazy views & sights that lame
My vision of you only rings pure
Only of you am I sure

Note: Don't get me wrong, I believe - somewhere way down in the dark
depths of my soul - that love does exist or can exist in whatever
manifestation we prefer it to; however, I'm just taking a short hiatus
myself from the present topic. By all means - love and be loved - life
is too short not to have something miraculous and sublime in it. Don't
read too much into this poem - it's just an expression of
imagination...hope you enjoyed.

FM

That was a geat poem.

Welcome to JSH fiercemunky.Good Luck and Have Fun :)

Beautiful anguish lingering words.

very good and welcome to JSH

not bad for a first post new bee...we'll be watching you...

Actually I have not read anything in to the poem.I enjoyed it very
much.We choose to encourage rather than criticize within the JSH comm.So
welcome to the Kewlest comm.on the net.Mix and mingle and get to know us
O.K.There are many good people within,Trust me!You will Luv the Poetry
forum here.We've got Poets with skills here,so enjoy and continue to
post alright.I'll see ya in the forums.Godspeed!Cybear.

Really Good,,, Welcome to JSH!!!!!!!!!!! Keep Writing!!!!!!

Well I really enjoyed it keep posting.

Welcome to the site!

Hey fierce- that was really good.I enjoyed it and think you have a great
way of expressing yourself.

Welcome and I look forward to seeing more of your talent here.
Bravo!

Good work Monkey, I think you will fit right in. Like Cybear said we
have a great group of people here. Enjoy and feel free to post as much
as you like most of us do.

:)TG and :)G

very heartfelt munkey. someday somewhere............or so they tell me

Very good. Welcome to the site.

Fantastic words ..welcome to the site..please post more!!

Loved it..

Now we expect more!!!!