Topic: the storm
jimz's photo
Fri 04/11/08 02:34 PM
Edited by jimz on Fri 04/11/08 02:36 PM
seasons
changing
my life

feeding
the wind

into
my soul

ancient
tornadoes

following
calm

limestone
dust

and fire
hot
coals

breathing
under

my feet

barometer
of
incidences

wanton
symbols

growing

into
the art

of the
storm

floods
drowning me

rain
filling
this dam

into my
empty sea

so the
poem

may
survive

and the
idea

of the
poem

itself

Queene123's photo
Fri 04/11/08 02:35 PM
flowerforyou sweet

jimz's photo
Fri 04/11/08 02:37 PM
thank you, nice to "meet" you

jimmy

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 04/11/08 03:57 PM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

(((Jimmy)))

jimz's photo
Fri 04/11/08 04:01 PM
thank you Susan, though I haven't met you in person, I miss the words of your soul, a lucky man is he, who captures your :heart:

peace and love
jimmy

LAMom's photo
Fri 04/11/08 07:47 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:

s1owhand's photo
Fri 04/11/08 09:38 PM
bigsmile

Sharris's photo
Fri 04/11/08 10:24 PM
Hello, I appreciate your intensity, depth. You are open, vulnerable to our elements and scrutiny. Brave man
s

no photo
Fri 04/11/08 10:25 PM
Nice Jimmy..WILL

pkh's photo
Sat 04/12/08 06:59 AM
Another good write Jimflowerforyou