I'm sending this back to the top with a challenge attached...

Ladies, write a poem in this same style with the same title and your idea of every woman's sectre fantasy...

You see what mine was and it was a fun write... Stripper pole here I come! NOT

Okay ((( Vicki )))) He ya go,,,


Night Falls upon us
Music Whispering in the darkness
She sets her stage
Costume in Rare Form
Slowly Gliding across the dance floor
Seduction in her Eyes
Moist are the Lips
As she Moves her hips

Fantasy Hmmmmmm maybe
As the Tassels flow with her motion
Stillness Overcomes the Crowd
Man of Eyes Seen through Fishnet Stockings
Lace to tease the taste
Reaching she takes,, one more Dollar Please
Hips move to the Beat
Undressing her Fantasy

Closing her Eyes,, Dreams or Reality
Fullfillment sets in As she Undress's
Men Begging,, Stage separtes the touch
Scent of a Women,, one can not touch
Lace dripping from her thighs
Dancing in motion
Lusting for the Touch
One more Dollar Please...

Awakin in the Night
Fallen Lace on the Floor
Scent of Cigar smoke filled room
Dollar bills fill the room
She Sighhhhhhhhh's what a night
Shhhhhhhhhhhh she rest's in her Reality
A Strippers Life,, Hmmmmmmmm
Only in my dreams,.,

Kewl that was really good girlfriend

WOOHOO!!! Knew you could take it off...

Make your way through mirrored halls
See the boys with all their dolls
A pretty maze, like candied streets
U feel a thrill when your eyes meet
U pick the one with the feathered hair
But I'm the one that makes the boys stare
There's a room, or so I'm told
Where the DJ rocks and we don't grow old
Would u like 2 take a ride?
All u have 2 do is come inside

CHORUS: Say hello 2 the room where the party's jumpin'
Where the boys all freak 'cause boots are bumpin'
Where the girls are naughty and always saying
"Yes u can, yes u can, yes u can"

U got on your money rags
And Papa's got a brand new bag
And Mama's got her hot pants on
While in the back, the beat goes on
Would u like 2 come along?
Then shut up and sing this song

CHORUS

The boys are pale
The girls are soft as nails
The band strikes up and it starts 2 wail
There's a price on everything
It's not cheap 2 buy your dreams

CHORUS: Say hello 2 the room where the party's jumpin'
Where the boys all freak 'cause boots are bumpin'
Where the girls are naughty and always saying
"Yes u can, yes u can, yes u can"

Written & Produced by Jewel
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yq8cOrRwUlU&feature=related

Wow Denise...Bravo...Encore...that was great. Beautiful, enticing as well.

Thanks a bunch

Vicki,, Kinda enjoyed that one,,,

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