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This is a poem I wrote a very long time ago for the guy I was with at
the time. Some of you wanted to see some of my poetry so I decided to post this...enjoy... As I recite this to you Ill look into your eyes And tell you, Your my one and only guy. Then ill take you hand Place it inside mine Tell you how I love you And how im glad Your always on my mind. I know sometimes I dont act like it But this is what I know, I cant get enough of you I hope youll never go. As I finish reading this I hope Ive made it clear, That I will always love you My sweet and loving dear. The End I hope you liked it. Like I said I wrote this a very long time ago. So if its not very good, I understand, and wont be upset if you dont like it. All critism is welcome, the good and the bad. |
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why would we critize something from the heart
it is good keep posting |
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stephycats...
you wont be condedmned here... Good Work girl... Keep posting |
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Awesom words Stephy gurl keep postin!!
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stephy ya are doll-- keep on postin'
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Very well written Stephy. Keep them coming.
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to live and love,and write your feelings on paper...
you only express your heart... you still with this man? or is he why you are here??? Good poem...please show us more... we hunger for words from the heart!!! |
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Stephy,was the Bear right or what?You have some of finest folks of JSH
responding to you already.Both feet are in the door(phew).We will not criticize,we like the word Encourage a whole lot more.I enjoyed this very much by the way,and I look forward to hearing more,meanwhile enjoy some of the fantastic Poetry these guys and gals are laying down.I can't stay out of this forum.Highly addictive be careful(lol)Keep posting and more importantly have Fun;)Godspeed!Cybear. |
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Thank you all for your kind words, you dont know how much they mean to
me. Oh and to answer Micheal1313. No I am no longer with the guy who the poem was written for. Sadly he dumped me because he couldnt handle my illness, and he had some problems with drinking all the time. I was broken hearted at first because I truly loved him so much, but now I see it was all for the best. So yes in a way he is the reason Im here. All my exes are in part a reason why I am here. But there loss as my mom would say, he everyone heres incredible gain. Cause now you all have a friend in me, and I hope I have a friend in you all as well. |
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Opps the last line was supposed to say as mom would say, IS your gain. I
ment to say is not he. Sorry about that lol. I guess my pain meds are making my typing a little messy sorry about that. Just bear with me and my bad writing lol. |
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