Topic: Sliding.
CrazyPalindrome's photo
Thu 04/10/08 10:59 PM
Oh I'm sliding again,
but up or down, I can't be sure.
So many doors to open,
so few keys left unbroken.

My calling hasn't called yet,
it lost my number I guess,
but I guess it's better
than it drunk dialing me again.

So many needs block the way of my wants,
and do many wants cause distraction to needs.
Such a silly thing to ask for,
a bubble machine.

Ah, my 39 cent therapy,
a bottle of joy.
Spheres of rainbow floating merrily,
a pleasant distraction.

Thoughts are a menace,
my brain is the enemy,
causing my pain in reminders,
but refusing to spill forth the words I need.

Where am I going?
Lost in a forest of ineptitude,
Hope shines so brightly
only to be a distracting toy.

I'm sliding again,
the walls of the well close in with my thoughts,
but the jubilance of bubbles
keeps me afloat for a while.

kk35695's photo
Thu 04/10/08 11:05 PM
Brilliant. I love this line.. "Lost in a forest of ineptitude" Hope you don't mind if I use it....:wink:

LAMom's photo
Thu 04/10/08 11:09 PM
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CrazyPalindrome's photo
Fri 04/11/08 07:17 AM

Brilliant. I love this line.. "Lost in a forest of ineptitude" Hope you don't mind if I use it....:wink:


Go right ahead! happy

s1owhand's photo
Fri 04/11/08 07:53 AM
flowerforyou

"i like that"

knock knock
my enemy come to call
not leaving me alone at all

companion waltz with me again
among such distractions as we may find

a bubble raft
like cheerios
in milk
you can't be serious

shiny toys
here beg for play
and you can't make them
go away

:wink:

(squeezes & tosses squeaky toys....teasingly)

bigsmile

no photo
Fri 04/11/08 08:04 AM
Very nice poem,,,thanks:heart: flowerforyou drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 04/11/08 03:30 PM
Good write! flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Fri 04/11/08 03:32 PM
flowerforyou
peace and love
jimmy