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Topic: Closure on the Deal
Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 11:20 AM
Closure on the Deal I never thought I would do it Putting closure on the deal, But I sent my last message Letting her know how I feel. I wished her luck and good-bye Then I left things be, All I was trying to do Was just being me. Now I am here to be the man That everyone came to know, The man, the friend, the writer, I'm ready to go. To find those words That I write so well, I plan on being here For quite a spell. Ya'll are stuck with me.

Silkbutterfli Joined Mon 07/30/07 Posts: 1008	Thu 04/10/08 11:21 AM
That was very nice, a little sad.

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 04/10/08 11:21 AM


Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 11:23 AM
That was very nice, a little sad. Thanks Silk...sad for her...I've got to move on.

mssilverfox Joined Sat 12/08/07 Posts: 10529	Thu 04/10/08 11:26 AM
Hope you hang around for a while Wolfeyes, love your writings

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 11:28 AM
Hope you hang around for a while Wolfeyes, love your writings I plan on staying around as long as I have breath in me. Thanks Ms..glad you like what I write.

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Thu 04/10/08 11:31 AM
Robert

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 11:33 AM
Robert Barb....

bttrflyv2 Joined Mon 12/04/06 Posts: 1880	Thu 04/10/08 11:42 AM
wow that said so much in just a few words...great job....and good luck with your new fresh start over with life

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 11:43 AM
wow that said so much in just a few words...great job....and good luck with your new fresh start over with life Thanks Butterfly...I tend to make my point in a few words. But I'm used to my long story poems.

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 04/10/08 11:46 AM
Nice way to have closure and am glad you're staying on with us!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 11:50 AM
Nice way to have closure and am glad you're staying on with us! Thanks sweetheart...as long as the good Lord lets me, I will be here to continue spreading my wit, charm, and good words.

bad_girl Joined Tue 07/17/07 Posts: 67379	Thu 04/10/08 12:05 PM
Glad you are staying

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 12:20 PM
Glad you are staying Thanks girl....I wouldn't have been any better off if I left. This is HOME.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 04/10/08 01:39 PM
Robert glad your staying

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Thu 04/10/08 01:59 PM
There comes a time in life sometimes when paths must split. For what reasons sometimes we will never know. But ... when that time comes to part ways we must always remember there is a reason for everything that happens in life. Just never forget they touched your heart for a reason within it they left footsteps of a love that once was. But... these are only footsteps to the love that is to be.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 07:46 PM
Robert glad your staying Thanks Pam, I don't know what I was thinking. I guess I wasn't too clearly. But, I won't never do it again.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 04/10/08 07:46 PM
There comes a time in life sometimes when paths must split. For what reasons sometimes we will never know. But ... when that time comes to part ways we must always remember there is a reason for everything that happens in life. Just never forget they touched your heart for a reason within it they left footsteps of a love that once was. But... these are only footsteps to the love that is to be. You certainly have a beautiful way with words sweetheart. That was beautiful and poetic as well. Thanks so much Kristi for all you do.

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Thu 04/10/08 07:57 PM
Be grateful for all that was shared between the two of you...it served you well while in its embrace... From the song ... I Wish You Love... "My breaking heart and I agree That you and I could never be So with my best My very best I set you free" May you find shelter from your storm ... and with gratitude in your heart, you will be free to love again Robert...

warmachine Joined Tue 04/08/08 Posts: 4528	Thu 04/10/08 08:00 PM
Wow, Wolf, that had some heart, dude!