Topic: Dreams of a Housewife | |
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I need a showerhead now? Nicely done That is a visual in itself! Thanks Den! |
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I'm sending this back to the top with a challenge attached...
Ladies, write a poem in this same style with the same title and your idea of every woman's sectre fantasy... You see what mine was and it was a fun write... Stripper pole here I come! NOT!! |
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Fri 04/11/08 08:54 AM
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Night crowded room smoke filled air light shines on you take a spin golden pole tease Fantasy barely touching holding on tightly spinning away all memory of real life best friend need Lust coming together sharing a kiss spinning into deep oblivion dancing for you wanting you desire Wish sad insecurity holding me back dreaming yet never having running from truth waking up reality EXCELLENT. This is brilliant, particularly the third stanza..... Hmmmmm I have to work today but will be pondering how to meet this challenge *grin* and I'm looking forward to it...*EVIL grin*.... |
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh My Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Must go do some ponderin,,
Awesome Me Lovely |
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That's OK, Zanne, we're all friends here! then hell ..I'll give it a shot... |
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A lady,,,,,A pole,,,,,and naked,,,with music. Sounds, a little painful,lol,lol BUT a Kodax moment for sure. ya kodax...carching us falling on our azzes... |
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Have fun with this ladies! I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO looking forward to your thoughts and fantasies!
Morning Zanne... You up for my challenge? |
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Vicki, what a poem...made my mind wander......guess I'd better go find it now.
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Vicki, what a poem...made my mind wander......guess I'd better go find it now. Thanks Brynda! Catch that sucker before it hurts somebody! |
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hmmm what a write my mind is still dreaming
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no cellphones allowed at the stage
lock a leg around the pole push off and let go spinning slowly to the floor cheering crowd wanting more |
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no cellphones allowed at the stage lock a leg around the pole push off and let go spinning slowly to the floor cheering crowd wanting more More to come... Thank you my friend glad you like it! |
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(((Lurchs_sister)))
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I could put music to that/Great job!
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