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kc0003
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Just a Kid
it was a bad day at school i got in a fight i hope mom lets me call him tonight they don’t get along but, what did i do so wrong i want him to know i’m alright when i hear the phone ring sometimes i pray that it’s him but, she won’t put me on the line it’s been so many days since we moved away i wish i could turn back time oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight oh mom please oh please it will be alright just let me call him tonight i lay my head down on the pillow again i didn’t get to hear his voice i’m just a kid i know but, i can't understand why i don’t even get a choice oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight please mommy please let me dial the phone i know he’s at home i want to talk to my daddy tonight kc08 |
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thanks mirror
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wow you have no idea how I can relate to this as my kids wanted nothing but there dad around and he couldn't be bothered.This brought tears to my eyes.So many kids going through this and it breaks my heart
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 so sad to hear the crys of a child wanting to hear the voice of another parent.
Good write
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Just a Kid it was a bad day at school i got in a fight i hope mom lets me call him tonight they don’t get along but, what did i do so wrong i want him to know i’m alright when i hear the phone ring sometimes i pray that it’s him but, she won’t put me on the line it’s been so many days since we moved away i wish i could turn back time oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight oh mom please oh please it will be alright just let me call him tonight i lay my head down on the pillow again i didn’t get to hear his voice i’m just a kid i know but, i can't understand why i don’t even get a choice oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight please mommy please let me dial the phone i know he’s at home i want to talk to my daddy tonight kc08 A wonderfully expressive way to let out the hurt child kc....I loved this....
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Just a Kid it was a bad day at school i got in a fight i hope mom lets me call him tonight they don’t get along but, what did i do so wrong i want him to know i’m alright when i hear the phone ring sometimes i pray that it’s him but, she won’t put me on the line it’s been so many days since we moved away i wish i could turn back time oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight oh mom please oh please it will be alright just let me call him tonight i lay my head down on the pillow again i didn’t get to hear his voice i’m just a kid i know but, i can't understand why i don’t even get a choice oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight please mommy please let me dial the phone i know he’s at home i want to talk to my daddy tonight kc08 kc...kc...kc 
emotions are always such a part of your writes i know you miss him and now i am crying with you the love you have for that boy is one of the things that makes you special one day he will come looking for you and when he does i pray your heart can be at peace.....  
S |
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(((( kc ))))
Wrapped in my arms,, He knows,,, He knows,,
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kc
damn man!!!! this one hurts D |
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I can relate to your poem man, through the eyes and mind of my step daughters life.
With her birth dad. He never ever anything, with her... Then when she got 17 she pushed child support against him. So what does he do? Takes a shotgun to his head,,,,,,but still lives 24 hrs for her to witness all that, and then, his new wife,,blame my daughter. Life, and care, and love. They ALL SHOW so much to everyone that can FEEL IT, or LACK OF.. Just some open chatter here... Sorry, YOUR poem here has power to recall...Thanks
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Just a Kid it was a bad day at school i got in a fight i hope mom lets me call him tonight they don’t get along but, what did i do so wrong i want him to know i’m alright when i hear the phone ring sometimes i pray that it’s him but, she won’t put me on the line it’s been so many days since we moved away i wish i could turn back time oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight oh mom please oh please it will be alright just let me call him tonight i lay my head down on the pillow again i didn’t get to hear his voice i’m just a kid i know but, i can't understand why i don’t even get a choice oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight please mommy please let me dial the phone i know he’s at home i want to talk to my daddy tonight kc08 A wonderfully expressive way to let out the hurt child kc....I loved this....
thank you wiz sometimes things are a little too real and i have to let them out before they devour me
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Just a Kid it was a bad day at school i got in a fight i hope mom lets me call him tonight they don’t get along but, what did i do so wrong i want him to know i’m alright when i hear the phone ring sometimes i pray that it’s him but, she won’t put me on the line it’s been so many days since we moved away i wish i could turn back time oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight oh mom please oh please it will be alright just let me call him tonight i lay my head down on the pillow again i didn’t get to hear his voice i’m just a kid i know but, i can't understand why i don’t even get a choice oh mom please oh please i’m hurting inside let me talk to my daddy tonight please mommy please let me dial the phone i know he’s at home i want to talk to my daddy tonight kc08 kc...kc...kc
emotions are always such a part of your writes i know you miss him and now i am crying with you the love you have for that boy is one of the things that makes you special one day he will come looking for you and when he does i pray your heart can be at peace.....
S thank you stef as you and a few others here know this does weigh heavy on my heart
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wow you have no idea how I can relate to this as my kids wanted nothing but there dad around and he couldn't be bothered.This brought tears to my eyes.So many kids going through this and it breaks my heart
yes Pam too many thank you
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so sad to hear the crys of a child wanting to hear the voice of another parent.
Good write
one of the saddest things i can think of T G
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I can relate to your poem man, through the eyes and mind of my step daughters life.
With her birth dad. He never ever anything, with her... Then when she got 17 she pushed child support against him. So what does he do? Takes a shotgun to his head,,,,,,but still lives 24 hrs for her to witness all that, and then, his new wife,,blame my daughter. Life, and care, and love. They ALL SHOW so much to everyone that can FEEL IT, or LACK OF.. Just some open chatter here... Sorry, YOUR poem here has power to recall...Thanks
dont be sorry 4 this was intended to show the innocence lost when mixed with the adult world of relationships |
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I'm not going to say I'm sorry because I know the things we have gone through make us who we are btu I will say that I understand and share...
What doesn't kill us makes us stronger... Thank you for the tears that soften my soul
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I'm not going to say I'm sorry because I know the things we have gone through make us who we are btu I will say that I understand and share... What doesn't kill us makes us stronger... Thank you for the tears that soften my soul
hum? well i do not subscribe to that line of thinking because going through this has definitely killed a part of me and the change it has brought to my soul probably would not be confused with strength |
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I'm not going to say I'm sorry because I know the things we have gone through make us who we are btu I will say that I understand and share... What doesn't kill us makes us stronger... Thank you for the tears that soften my soul
hum? well i do not subscribe to that line of thinking because going through this has definitely killed a part of me and the change it has brought to my soul probably would not be confused with strength This I understand and a part of me was killed as well though it was the physical part of us I was talking about being killed not the spiritual. I have lost a great deal of myself but I have found so much in its place that it amazes me. You ahve true strength just in knowing you can move on and keep going. |
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Excellent write my friend. I'm probably gonna need a transplant now because my heart stopped beating with this one.
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Excellent write my friend. I'm probably gonna need a transplant now because my heart stopped beating with this one.
as long as you don’t sue me to cover the cost but i will come visit you when you recover it is the least i could do |
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