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Topic: A haiku...or several...
ajartfuldodger's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:24 PM
Edited by ajartfuldodger on Tue 04/08/08 12:08 AM
Sitting here alone,
Apart from what should be close,
Hope burns in my eyes.

Fear not for the Sun,
While the night sky fades away,
Brightness overcomes.

Instigation for,
Irritation without cause,
Patience will prevail.

Tick-tock tick-tock tick,
Still I stand worn by weather,
Stone and sand as one.

Petty pretenses,
Informal fake emotion,
Just be real, feel, Feel.

*shrug* I like haikus, what can I say.
Hope you enjoyed them! :smile:

EDIT:
Here is a new rule,
Please do it in haiku form,
If you wish to post.

It's Five Seven Five,
I mean syllables that is,
Find the rhythm, try.

MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:24 PM
flowerforyou

ajartfuldodger's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:27 PM
I got a flower!bigsmile

tellmesomethinggood's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:28 PM
Haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
refrigerator

:tongue:

ajartfuldodger's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:29 PM
:P Ur mom is easy.

tellmesomethinggood's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:31 PM
erm I was just teasing ohwell

ajartfuldodger's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:32 PM
Edited by ajartfuldodger on Mon 04/07/08 11:33 PM
:wink: and here I was being dead serious laugh laugh
flowerforyou

tellmesomethinggood's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:33 PM
lol, ok I took the hook...must be the hour :tongue:

ajartfuldodger's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:37 PM
Tired eyes cloud judgement,
What should be a laugh turns sour,
Lemonade brings smiles.

haha...i love it.

no photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:42 PM
Alone with dreams
The future I planned for two
Would you dream with me?

no photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:45 PM
Alone with my dreams
The future I planned for two
Would you dream with me?


sorry about the typo above

no photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:49 PM
As I watch our child
Only half of the whole of her
Where are you tonight?

ajartfuldodger's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:50 PM
With you here by me,
Time is an eternity,
Death has no power.
:wink:

ajartfuldodger's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:51 PM
Though I may falter,
I will never surrender,
To demons of doubt.

ajartfuldodger's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:54 PM
Flow from the spoken,
Words like water sprinkle out,
Nourishing my mind.

no photo
Tue 04/08/08 12:01 AM
The artful dodger
A very talented man
Started a great thread

ajartfuldodger's photo
Tue 04/08/08 12:04 AM
Little red hen sends,
Some complimentary words,
Makes me blush and smile.
flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 04/08/08 12:06 AM
Sipping tea at two
Writing this silly haiku
Wish it was sake

ajartfuldodger's photo
Tue 04/08/08 12:11 AM
To drink is to smile,
To smoke is to achieve peace,
To sleep is to dream.

no photo
Tue 04/08/08 12:16 AM
Oh you are so young

Such a cute, talented man

You could call me "mom"

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