Topic: Don't have a title, could use one have any good ideas!
iamlookingforyou2's photo
Mon 04/07/08 10:19 AM
You. every facet, every side, every moment
Spent with you makes me reel.
What will it be like to finally hold you?

You find me held by your voice, hanging on
To the words you whisper
How helpless will I be under your hands?

There are still spaces in me,
No one has ever touched;
Spaces i reserve for you alone.

I have no stories to tell
No games to play,
No reason to be anything but yours.

We have been each of us to the same hell
By different roads
And emerged by the same path.

We know what it takes
To be more than passing in the night.

I see it in you
And hope you see it in me
I know you are afraid
So am I,
But neither of us ever gained,
By not taking the chance.

MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 04/07/08 10:19 AM
flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 04/07/08 10:24 AM

You. every facet, every side, every moment
Spent with you makes me reel.
What will it be like to finally hold you?

You find me held by your voice, hanging on
To the words you whisper
How helpless will I be under your hands?

There are still spaces in me,
No one has ever touched;
Spaces i reserve for you alone.

I have no stories to tell
No games to play,
No reason to be anything but yours.

We have been each of us to the same hell
By different roads
And emerged by the same path.

We know what it takes
To be more than passing in the night.

I see it in you
And hope you see it in me
I know you are afraid
So am I,
But neither of us ever gained,
By not taking the chance.

How about "The Reel Paths of Your Whispers"

iamlookingforyou2's photo
Mon 04/07/08 10:26 AM


You. every facet, every side, every moment
Spent with you makes me reel.
What will it be like to finally hold you?

You find me held by your voice, hanging on
To the words you whisper
How helpless will I be under your hands?

There are still spaces in me,
No one has ever touched;
Spaces i reserve for you alone.

I have no stories to tell
No games to play,
No reason to be anything but yours.

We have been each of us to the same hell
By different roads
And emerged by the same path.

We know what it takes
To be more than passing in the night.

I see it in you
And hope you see it in me
I know you are afraid
So am I,
But neither of us ever gained,
By not taking the chance.

How about "The Reel Paths of Your Whispers"


Wow thats really good thanks!

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 04/07/08 10:29 AM



You. every facet, every side, every moment
Spent with you makes me reel.
What will it be like to finally hold you?

You find me held by your voice, hanging on
To the words you whisper
How helpless will I be under your hands?

There are still spaces in me,
No one has ever touched;
Spaces i reserve for you alone.

I have no stories to tell
No games to play,
No reason to be anything but yours.

We have been each of us to the same hell
By different roads
And emerged by the same path.

We know what it takes
To be more than passing in the night.

I see it in you
And hope you see it in me
I know you are afraid
So am I,
But neither of us ever gained,
By not taking the chance.

How about "The Reel Paths of Your Whispers"


Wow thats really good thanks!

You're welcome...anytime. Glad you liked it and hope I can help again.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 04/07/08 04:03 PM
Good write! flowerforyou

At some point we have to step out with courage and faith!

no photo
Mon 04/07/08 04:04 PM
:heart: :heart: :heart: flowerforyou Very nice, thanks..

no photo
Mon 04/07/08 04:07 PM
I would GUESS, a name mite be. " One step forward, with you".
Or just 'one step forward'...:heart: just my thoughts..?