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  Raging within me Look into my eyes What do you see I am strong Fit and able Yet it tugs at me Like a taut cable I do not like What I must do But I will not quit Till this is through The battle rages Every day Though I am tired It won't go away I have a heart How it does hurt I wish that all Could see thier worth Sometimes I hang My head in shame I am not better Yet we're not the same I fight for what Is right and true I ignore the pain To help protect you I've moved around From place to place You don't understand I see in your face I cannot abide All the disrespcet And so my duty I will not neglect I am so tired I've fought so long Against the odds Against what's wrong A day will come When I must rest I hope God knows I did my best  | 
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(((Sister)))  | 
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      Just beautiful hun  
      
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        Beautiful write!  If we all did our best and tried as hard as you there'd be a lot less pain in the world.  Keep it up!
     
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      ((((Twitch))))
 
  ((((MsT)))) Thanks ladies!       
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      Another warrior woman 
    very nice  
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      Vicki   
If you could truely see the you I see through my eyes,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh My,,, Your words have truely touched me   
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      Awesome write indeed 
    
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      ((((Kate)))
 
  ((((Dragoness)))) {{{{Denise}}}}     
Thanks to each of you!!     
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     Awesome write indeed   
((((Tx))))   
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      That was awesome....competition I see. That was really a good read. We could put a book together. Hell for that matter why not a book of JSH members of poetry???
     
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     That was awesome....competition I see. That was really a good read. We could put a book together. Hell for that matter why not a book of JSH members of poetry??? Thank you kind sir, curtsey   
I would love to put a book together! I have been thinking about getting published when I have enough together. I also thought of putting a book together for my brother and filling it with pictures of him.  | 
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     That was awesome....competition I see. That was really a good read. We could put a book together. Hell for that matter why not a book of JSH members of poetry??? Thank you kind sir, curtsey   
I would love to put a book together! I have been thinking about getting published when I have enough together. I also thought of putting a book together for my brother and filling it with pictures of him. That would be a good idea for all of it....and bowing to the dear lady.  | 
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      beautiful as always! 
    
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      (((((Ron))))) 
        
When are you going to be writing again?  | 
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        u are amazing with ur writing..
but most importantly....you are a woman with a heart and soul..as big as the sun and moon....u are a bright and shining star...      to u my sister Vicky..
thank u for being you.. Semper FI Sister Suz     
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      You know you are one brave lady Sis, I admire your strength and your power to overcome your adversities. Blessed be !
     
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 very nice
   u are amazing with ur writing..