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![]() Another write with all my heart. To be seen or to die. To really be read. Your words must flow cool, or killed dead If you write trash and come off just wanting to bash. Readers will not reply, seeing you as, not really wanting to try And if your not in the click, might as well just yank yo d`i`c`k Many come here, many will go. Some will stay, some will grow. Me I just hang around, in some poems. Or trying to be found. Been here for a lon---g time. Still find myself trying to rhyme. Friends on every thread, but here im still, trying to be read. Whats the point of my words, my feelings here tonight. I guess what im saying is, watch these words fall out of sight. Its sliding down manner, asking myself, who is this executioner? |
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oh man i really read it...
if you are like me many will read but, few will post who knows why hell i even like the ones that tell me my stuff is sh** ![]() |
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Interesting. It seemed kind of confusing and cheezy at first, but after giving it more thought, I appreciate your blatent and heartfelt expression. It doesn't have to be profound, just real. Thanks
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beautifully done, my friend.... hope all is well in indy, it was our first nice day here, since nov.
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oh man i really read it... if you are like me many will read but, few will post who knows why hell i even like the ones that tell me my stuff is sh** ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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beautifully done, my friend.... hope all is well in indy, it was our first nice day here, since nov. ![]() And like you,lol..Its about time...and Thanks Bro... ![]() |
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Interesting. It seemed kind of confusing and cheezy at first, but after giving it more thought, I appreciate your blatent and heartfelt expression. It doesn't have to be profound, just real. Thanks ![]() ![]() |
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You made me take a deeper look into something I've been feeling... Good on you!
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You made me take a deeper look into something I've been feeling... Good on you! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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![]() even though its died, SEVERAL DEATHS, I seem to KEEP resurecting IT,,,,,CALL ME,,, ecsentric, and STILL in need of SPELLCHECK,lol ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nope... ![]() ![]() ![]() ***SPLAT**** |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nope... ![]() ![]() ![]() ***SPLAT**** ![]() ![]() ,,,,,,,,,,,,BIG TROUBLE,,,,and ,,,, I must dry off, and THEN YOUNG LADY,,,,,, ![]() ![]() You will SEE and feel MY WATER!!!!!!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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I still say.....
Ya gotta catch me first..... ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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I still say..... Ya gotta catch me first..... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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