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Topic: Poetry By Request
LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/05/08 09:39 AM
This one goes out to anyone, but it must start with this line "I watched intently as the wax slowly flowed down the candle" This should be fun Den ***************************************** My Reply: I watched intently as the wax slowly flowed down the candle Like your fingers tips,, I recall memories of the touch Long ago,, Soft, warm, embrace,, Desire the flame Passion in the making,,, Warmth ecstasy takes over me Flowing from my hands to your flesh Dripping pleasure,,, ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh sweet Bliss Scents of Flesh,,, Taste of Rose Lovers dancing in the glow Drips of Wax,,,,Melting... Melting With pure Desire Slowly falling to his every Desire Intently flowing with me.......

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Sat 04/05/08 09:41 AM
EXCELLENT WRITE,SLOW PACE This one goes out to anyone, but it must start with this line "I watched intently as the wax slowly flowed down the candle" This should be fun Den ***************************************** My Reply: I watched intently as the wax slowly flowed down the candle Like your fingers tips,, I recall memories of the touch Long ago,, Soft, warm, embrace,, Desire the flame Passion in the making,,, Warmth ecstasy takes over me Flowing from my hands to your flesh Dripping pleasure,,, ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh sweet Bliss Scents of Flesh,,, Taste of Rose Lovers dancing in the glow Drips of Wax,,,,Melting... Melting With pure Desire Slowly falling to his every Desire Intently flowing with me.......

mssilverfox Joined Sat 12/08/07 Posts: 10529	Sat 04/05/08 09:41 AM
This one goes out to anyone, but it must start with this line "I watched intently as the wax slowly flowed down the candle" This should be fun Den ***************************************** My Reply: I watched intently as the wax slowly flowed down the candle Like your fingers tips,, I recall memories of the touch Long ago,, Soft, warm, embrace,, Desire the flame Passion in the making,,, Warmth ecstasy takes over me Flowing from my hands to your flesh Dripping pleasure,,, ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh sweet Bliss Scents of Flesh,,, Taste of Rose Lovers dancing in the glow Drips of Wax,,,,Melting... Melting With pure Desire Slowly falling to his every Desire Intently flowing with me....... Wow

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 04/05/08 09:43 AM


TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Sat 04/05/08 09:59 AM
Awesome now I like that one ewwwwwwww gave me a warm and fuzzy feeling

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 04/05/08 10:02 AM
WoooooHoooooooooo Good one (((Denise)))

Jaden11 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 105	Sat 04/05/08 10:18 AM
WOW That was intense

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 04/05/08 10:20 AM
Double wow

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/05/08 10:20 AM
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Thanks a bunch,,,

guyguy1225 Joined Sat 09/15/07 Posts: 1936	Sat 04/05/08 10:26 AM
Again Denise this quite the erotic poem.....liked it

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 04/05/08 12:16 PM
Very, Hot, Romantic, sexy, luring,,,,so,,,YOU.. Nice sweat,,,,, lol.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 04/05/08 12:20 PM
wow mom very nice indeed

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/05/08 01:36 PM
Thanks everyone,, I kinda enjoyed writing this one,,, ((( kc ))))) Nice to see ya,,, Hope the Storm has passed and all is well

will6 Joined Thu 09/07/06 Posts: 1212	Wed 04/09/08 01:31 AM
SWEET

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 04/09/08 07:47 AM
Very good sweetheart...all I can envision..is the comparison. WOW...erotic, romantic, just the right touch. Loved it.

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Wed 04/09/08 01:57 PM
denise, you are the coolest!