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My favorite is the first stazna. I can taste the smoke in the air as I listen to a crowd of slightly toasted bar patrons and hot blues in the background.....love it kc! Wonderful write!!
thank you Alicia glad this one got through... of course you know how i regard your comments
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very nice kc
very real as well i liked the irony of the last line D |
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You have to be a better typer than me,lol,lol
Your story was great and you are the man,,bravo....
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I so look forward to reading more of your work. I am always transported ... and I love those moments where time and space disappear ... and for that moment ... I am there ... in the story.
Thank you!
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You have to be a better typer than me,lol,lol Your story was great and you are the man,,bravo....
type, no,no i peck but i would never claim to be a better pecker than anyone
thank you for the kind words |
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I so look forward to reading more of your work. I am always transported ... and I love those moments where time and space disappear ... and for that moment ... I am there ... in the story. Thank you!
thank you AG i appreciate your words very much
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You have to be a better typer than me,lol,lol Your story was great and you are the man,,bravo....
type, no,no i peck but i would never claim to be a better pecker than anyone
thank you for the kind words I think someoen still has my poem in their head
No pun,,,,in-tend-ed.lol |
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You have to be a better typer than me,lol,lol Your story was great and you are the man,,bravo....
type, no,no i peck but i would never claim to be a better pecker than anyone
thank you for the kind words I think someoen still has my poem in their head
No pun,,,,in-tend-ed.lol unfortunately the oven didn’t do the trick
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very nice kc very real as well i liked the irony of the last line D thanks d glad to see you got it
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Excellent brought back memories for me in my bartending years,awesome as always
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Excellent brought back memories for me in my bartending years,awesome as always
thank you Pam i am sure you could tell a few good stories about this as well
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very nice kc very real as well i liked the irony of the last line D thanks d glad to see you got it
kc... great read i had to come back to it we will call you tomorrow D |
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very nice kc very real as well i liked the irony of the last line D thanks d glad to see you got it
kc... great read i had to come back to it we will call you tomorrow D glad to see you two got through the storm safely s
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I really like that my friend
Very nicely done
~Den |
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I really like that my friend Very nicely done
~Den thanks den i appreciate that |
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hey kc
pick up your phone... D |
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you have been "vaulted"
we cant wait to see you S & D |
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