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It's such an awful thing to say...
that you took my love away. but it's something that I know we can't deny. I finally see it true, yeah, I finally, caught you. In your tiny, little wholesome, lovers lie. You've been cheating on me... girl, it's easy to see. I can feel it in your arms, I don't know why... I can see it in your face... Your smiles outta place, I can hear it in your wholesome, lovers lie. Does he tell you what to say? When you want to get away? Does he tell you that I'll never know the truth? Doesn't he think I'll ever know? Or question where you go? When I notice just how much you act aloof? Does he touch you the same way? Or better, I must say... Obviously, since you go to him, that must be why... Cause it's not the way I love, that his presence reminds you of... It's the Tingle, of a wholesome, lovers lie. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild 
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 I like this alot, very nice job.
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Edited by
RICKG1961
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Wed 04/02/08 05:48 AM
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nice write 
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Good write! |
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Awww... nice... "wholesome lovers lie" is just such a good line
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I like this alot, very nice job.
 vabeach, thank you. to sweet.
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Awww... nice... "wholesome lovers lie" is just such a good line I like it as well, although it can be brutal. lol. Thanks Crazy |
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Very well written, I like the way this is structured (suppressed /subdued anger)and in so doing makes this an eloquent write
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You always know the right thing to say Bonny
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