Topic: Rain
CrazyPalindrome's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:32 AM
Somehow,
this rain is more beautiful to me,
than the cold blue sky of yesterday.
Feeling alive, cool spatters on my cheek
I march through memory,
breathing in the scent of earth and sky.
Wind breathes life into my soul again,
winter's frosty grip is loosened,
melted into puddles, joy for ducks,
and small children with galoshes alike.
I regret my lack of galoshes today,
wishing I could revel in the rejuvination.
The claustrophobia of buldings and texts,
are washed away,
leaving me free and alive.
The beauty of everyday weather,
never ceases to amaze me.

JaceKnows's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:35 AM
I love the rain, and your writing. Splendid. (=

FroznChild's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:36 AM
The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread.
Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy...
What are you, three and a half beats?

wildsideof35's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:36 AM
I like rain but we've had more than our fair share of it the last month.....needs to dry out some...it is better than the cold and snow!!!!drinker drinker flowerforyou

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:36 AM
Well, Merci Buckets!

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:38 AM

I like rain but we've had more than our fair share of it the last month.....needs to dry out some...it is better than the cold and snow!!!!drinker drinker flowerforyou


Yeah... I'm pretty sure Maine still has snow now! I'm sure my relatives would almost pay to get warm weather to clear away the snow. I just hope it doesn't flood this year, they got a ton of snow.

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:39 AM
Edited by CrazyPalindrome on Wed 04/02/08 04:47 AM

The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread.
Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy...
What are you, three and a half beats?


blushing Well thank you!


I don't really know what my style is... I just know when rhythem feels right to me. Sometimes I like to rhyme, sometimes it sounds too... cheap or commercial that way.

I could prolly whip up a goofy jingle in no time... I used to love that kind of thing... I wish I could find some of my middle school poetry hahahahaha.... oh man.

s1owhand's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:46 AM
cry on me sky
your springtime sadness
another year gone
quietly
washed away
enjoy your soft soaking now
summer's coming
tense heat and swiftly rising air
crashing downdrafts
swirling torrents
pounding droplets
flashing storms
violence
and
thunder

FroznChild's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:49 AM


The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread.
Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy...
What are you, three and a half beats?


blushing Well thank you!


I don't really know what my style is... I just know when rhythem feels right to me. Sometimes I like to rhyme, sometimes it sounds too... cheap or commercial that way.

I could prolly whip up a goofy jingle in no time... I used to love that kind of thing... I wish I could find some of my middle school poetry hahahahaha.... oh man.

Lol... not so much asking your style, as making light of your name a little bit... laugh

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Wed 04/02/08 04:57 AM



The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread.
Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy...
What are you, three and a half beats?


blushing Well thank you!


I don't really know what my style is... I just know when rhythem feels right to me. Sometimes I like to rhyme, sometimes it sounds too... cheap or commercial that way.

I could prolly whip up a goofy jingle in no time... I used to love that kind of thing... I wish I could find some of my middle school poetry hahahahaha.... oh man.

Lol... not so much asking your style, as making light of your name a little bit... laugh


Ah ha. Well, I was a bit confused, but I decided to act like I knew what I was talking about. Hahaha! I guess it didn't work out as well as I planned!

FroznChild's photo
Wed 04/02/08 05:02 AM
Lmao... Any plan of action, is better then no plan of action.
Well done! ha ha.
I figured you would get it, knowing what a palindrome is.:tongue:

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Wed 04/02/08 05:09 AM

Lmao... Any plan of action, is better then no plan of action.
Well done! ha ha.
I figured you would get it, knowing what a palindrome is.:tongue:


I was born a palindrome, there was no way I could have avoided learning the word haha! All I need is to marry someone who's last name is O'Hannah or somesuch, and I'll be a complete palindrome!

FroznChild's photo
Wed 04/02/08 05:13 AM
Then your first name must be Scarlet... lol. j/k.

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Wed 04/02/08 05:19 AM

Then your first name must be Scarlet... lol. j/k.


then maybe I wouldn't have gotten so much flack for spelling my name "forewards" instead of "backwards." My relatives never ceased to be amused by that. *sigh* I guess teasing small children is an enjoyable pasttime... unless you're the small child.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 04/02/08 10:08 AM
happy happy happy

Niceeeeeee write! flowerforyou