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Somehow,
this rain is more beautiful to me, than the cold blue sky of yesterday. Feeling alive, cool spatters on my cheek I march through memory, breathing in the scent of earth and sky. Wind breathes life into my soul again, winter's frosty grip is loosened, melted into puddles, joy for ducks, and small children with galoshes alike. I regret my lack of galoshes today, wishing I could revel in the rejuvination. The claustrophobia of buldings and texts, are washed away, leaving me free and alive. The beauty of everyday weather, never ceases to amaze me. |
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I love the rain, and your writing. Splendid. (=
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The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread.
Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy... What are you, three and a half beats? |
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I like rain but we've had more than our fair share of it the last month.....needs to dry out some...it is better than the cold and snow!!!!
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Well, Merci Buckets!
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I like rain but we've had more than our fair share of it the last month.....needs to dry out some...it is better than the cold and snow!!!! Yeah... I'm pretty sure Maine still has snow now! I'm sure my relatives would almost pay to get warm weather to clear away the snow. I just hope it doesn't flood this year, they got a ton of snow. |
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Edited by
CrazyPalindrome
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Wed 04/02/08 04:47 AM
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The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread. Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy... What are you, three and a half beats? Well thank you! I don't really know what my style is... I just know when rhythem feels right to me. Sometimes I like to rhyme, sometimes it sounds too... cheap or commercial that way. I could prolly whip up a goofy jingle in no time... I used to love that kind of thing... I wish I could find some of my middle school poetry hahahahaha.... oh man. |
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cry on me sky
your springtime sadness another year gone quietly washed away enjoy your soft soaking now summer's coming tense heat and swiftly rising air crashing downdrafts swirling torrents pounding droplets flashing storms violence and thunder |
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The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread. Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy... What are you, three and a half beats? Well thank you! I don't really know what my style is... I just know when rhythem feels right to me. Sometimes I like to rhyme, sometimes it sounds too... cheap or commercial that way. I could prolly whip up a goofy jingle in no time... I used to love that kind of thing... I wish I could find some of my middle school poetry hahahahaha.... oh man. Lol... not so much asking your style, as making light of your name a little bit... |
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The poems that I have read from your recently, haven't ceased to amaze me as of yet! specially a few in the request thread. Well written,... beautifully done, Crazy... What are you, three and a half beats? Well thank you! I don't really know what my style is... I just know when rhythem feels right to me. Sometimes I like to rhyme, sometimes it sounds too... cheap or commercial that way. I could prolly whip up a goofy jingle in no time... I used to love that kind of thing... I wish I could find some of my middle school poetry hahahahaha.... oh man. Lol... not so much asking your style, as making light of your name a little bit... Ah ha. Well, I was a bit confused, but I decided to act like I knew what I was talking about. Hahaha! I guess it didn't work out as well as I planned! |
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Lmao... Any plan of action, is better then no plan of action.
Well done! ha ha. I figured you would get it, knowing what a palindrome is. |
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Lmao... Any plan of action, is better then no plan of action. Well done! ha ha. I figured you would get it, knowing what a palindrome is. I was born a palindrome, there was no way I could have avoided learning the word haha! All I need is to marry someone who's last name is O'Hannah or somesuch, and I'll be a complete palindrome! |
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Then your first name must be Scarlet... lol. j/k.
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Then your first name must be Scarlet... lol. j/k. then maybe I wouldn't have gotten so much flack for spelling my name "forewards" instead of "backwards." My relatives never ceased to be amused by that. *sigh* I guess teasing small children is an enjoyable pasttime... unless you're the small child. |
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Niceeeeeee write! |
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