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Topic: ~No Pawn~
ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Mon 03/31/08 11:12 PM
You do this, Or I'll do that. It's effortless, Like wearing a hat. Always the same, Your foolish ways. Somehow a game, In all you say. She runs to me, With arms open wide. Can't you see, What she can't hide? Hurt our girl, Is all you do. A confusing whirl, You put her through. One of these days, You'll see the dawn. She'll make you pay, You'll know she's no pawn. March 31, 2008

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 03/31/08 11:14 PM
i hope it is a dark dawn hi ellgee

ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Mon 03/31/08 11:17 PM
hey kc..im sure he'll love the outcome of my call to the lawyer (for those that don't know, that's my sarcasm)

JaceKnows Joined Mon 11/12/07 Posts: 5110	Mon 03/31/08 11:20 PM
hey kc..im sure he'll love the outcome of my call to the lawyer (for those that don't know, that's my sarcasm) Uh oh!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 03/31/08 11:25 PM
hey kc..im sure he'll love the outcome of my call to the lawyer (for those that don't know, that's my sarcasm) And for THOSE that know......That was GREAT!!!!! Nice read young lady and Bravo for YOU and her,,,,wink.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 03/31/08 11:36 PM
hey kc..im sure he'll love the outcome of my call to the lawyer (for those that don't know, that's my sarcasm) poor bast#@% the wrath of ellgee is on it's way

ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Mon 03/31/08 11:45 PM
hey kc..im sure he'll love the outcome of my call to the lawyer (for those that don't know, that's my sarcasm) poor bast#@% the wrath of ellgee is on it's way poor bastard is right..but he's sorta brought it on himself..

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 03/31/08 11:48 PM
hey kc..im sure he'll love the outcome of my call to the lawyer (for those that don't know, that's my sarcasm) poor bast#@% the wrath of ellgee is on it's way poor bastard is right..but he's sorta brought it on himself.. hey you know where i stand on that kind of stuff...

ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Mon 03/31/08 11:50 PM
hey kc..im sure he'll love the outcome of my call to the lawyer (for those that don't know, that's my sarcasm) poor bast#@% the wrath of ellgee is on it's way poor bastard is right..but he's sorta brought it on himself.. hey you know where i stand on that kind of stuff... yeah i do KC...i so do

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 04/01/08 12:21 AM
Take care of your baby...And take care of YOUR control to get him LESS......

nightruler Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 653	Tue 04/01/08 01:25 AM
Loved it,you're still one of the best

theels08 Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 1133	Tue 04/01/08 02:19 AM
good poem

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 04/01/08 07:06 AM


TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76437	Tue 04/01/08 07:43 AM
One thing for sure no matter what you do within the rights of a lawyer the biggest price will come in the end once they grow up. Then it will be too late and even a lawyer want be able to undo the damage he has done. As they say what goes around comes around. Once they loose the respect of a child it is one of the hardest things to regain if they ever do.

ellgee1976 Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 7296	Tue 04/01/08 08:58 PM
thnx everyone for your words... for all the parents that go thru this, i sympathize for all the parents that do this to their child...i also sympathize, cuz one day, you'll see the damage you've done, and it will hit you 10 times more hard

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 04/02/08 03:12 AM
Good write- good share... Children are deffintely NOT a pawn!