oh ice i dont know you but im sorry for your pain sometimes men can be
so cruel exspecially when it comes to kids but always know you r there
mommy and nothing can take that away
if u want to talk even though we dont know each other im here
i hope youll be ok

cybear i love it i know i have an opinion on this subject but ill leave
it alone thanks for this poem

oh how happy this day is suppose to be
how can i smile without you here with me
valentines day isnt to far away
i still dont know what to say
youve captured my heart
just please dont tear it apart
if we meet here on jshi
i hoope we wont have to say goodbye
flowers and such dont meaen that much
just holding you and feeling your touch
hoping to find one true love
ill keep asking the man above
finding true love is so hard to do
waiting and wishing to be with you
until the day we are able to be together
ill stand by and try forever

written by/ sharon/daddysgirlforever
1-3-06

wow that was a great one im glad you have that
keep up the writing

this is so sweet im also glad to see u writing again

like so many before me have said it has to be true love unconditional,
heart pounding and wanting to be with that person forever but yes if it
was a guy who cared about more than
getting a piece and wanted to build a beautiful relationship with who
you both had so many things in comon and still had so much to learn even
after a few years then yes byll means committ
committ dont walk run into there arms and never leave cuz trust me true
love doesnt come around very often

you are such a good poet this one was as if i were there

really cute poet i like to build snowmen never tried the witch
gooat try that next time

baby girl you are not alone thats why were here

ok i agree comletion of soul it is
although soul mation is good to
thanks everybody

ha ha ha your so funny

thanks sweety hey i told my daugter about your poems i hope you
dont mind i just think your poems would interest her
i know i love to read them

my m1313 i thought that was very beautiful whoever you find!!
i hope she will have a life time to enjoy every word you write
keep em coming

ok m1313 this ones for you


groundhog day what a big joke
will it be early spring or will it snow
everyone watching everyone waiting
just to see this crazy groundhog come out of his hole
why do we watch why do we care
its not up to him its up to the man upstairs
hes in control of everything
so like my poem reads
still waiting on spring
do get me wrong i know the groundhog is cute
how many times has he been right do you wounder too

i know this is corney but m1313 asked for it so here it is

awe i know ive not been here very long but think you are a great person
and would make an excellent friend
if everyone had at least one friend like you they would be very blessed

thanks im glad someone told me, but its ok i rewrote it and kinda titled
it

been looking for a completion to my soul
where can he be does anyone know
is he out there where did he go
i want so bad to make us whole
walking in, to flowers and wine
candle lit dinner i think that would be fine
sitting there holding you that is what i want to do
are you there do you feel it too
carressing and kissing you can lead to more
oh how our hearts would soar
once weve reached our climax together
we do it again and again it seems like forever
the next thing we know morning has come
but wait a minute were not done
finally we get up things come to an end
you look at me and say come back to bed
oh how wounderful this has been
then i hear wake up your dreaming again

hey i posted a poem last night and i was woudering if you dont title it
in the subject dept. will it not be posted cuz i cant find it?huh
confused

i afree with tx that was really good and as one has told me the more you
write the betterit will get so keep writing
thanks for sharing that

oh my god that was so beautiful i almost cried im sorry for your loss i
know no words can messure up to having her but hopefully writing will
help i know it does me thanks for sharing that with all of us