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Open letter to a girl
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soo well written ☺ enjoyed reading
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nice one dear
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US
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nice
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"Life has no Taboo's"
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as Im reading thru each line, I get to feel those lines so truly written☺ adorable one ❤
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hope!
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it touches every heart...nice poem... Thank you dear 🥰 |
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hope!
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Believe in God, that's what faith to do to make it real...to HOPE is like to LOVE with someone whom you are willing to wait and search for the right one...He/She might not be perfect but surely love, care, respect and understand you forever. There is still hope for everything just keep on praying and searching....answers is always everywhere... your words radiate such positivity and kindness🥰 God bless you Thank you |
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blessing in disguise!
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Nice poem . Thank you |
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blessing in disguise!
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a butterfly with shining wings entered a dark garden,
found a women deeply saddened! it flew near, questioning the women's fear! she as always did not notice the butterfly, as her struggles made her cry! it flew across giving a light from its wings, making the women notice it's swings! she as always had a worry, as her anxieties kept her in a hurry! it flapped it's wings creating magical cards in air, making the women hear it's ethical words with care! she blinked her heavy eyes once n twice, as she started to gaze as it flies! it accompanied her, sat near her, hearing her share, making the women come out of her despair! she smiled once n twice n thrice, as she started to enjoy it's company being wise! it made the garden pleasantly lighted, making the women peacefully delighted! she enjoyed it's blissful blessing, as she thanked with gratitude expressing! --Aatheera |
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Sleepless nights
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so well expressed!! ❤
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Heal and be in peace!
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That was awesome very heartfelt and it ended on a positive note Thank you |
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Heal and be in peace!
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I appreciate the sentiment you've expressed here, Aatheera. Thank you |
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Heal and be in peace!
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This write is BEAUTIFUL thanks be to God BLESSINGS to you ALWAYS, Coldersky minus the halo,,, Thanks a ton ☺ Blessings to you too ❤ |
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Heal and be in peace!
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I don't Care what other People Think about this Poem .
2B honest I enjoy reading This Poem . Thanks a ton ☺ |
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Heal and be in peace!
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Nice poem . Thank you ☺ |
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Heal and be in peace!
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when you are broken,
and left forsaken, suffer, wither, struggle and cry, until your eyes become dry, days will be painful, nights more tearful, a day will come! to reap the pains for some! your heart will be healed, with care well sealed! your thoughts will be renewed, with peace well secured! For God knows you are worth, understanding you since birth! Remain in peace dear, for God is there to hear! ---Aatheera |
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my rainbow, my best friend!
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Nice poem . Thankyou |
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my rainbow, my best friend!
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It's been a long time!
I've felt you as mine! Days and months ran so fast, Your thoughts didn't fade though past! Thought if I could message you this morning, But feared if I'll be ignored kept me worrying! Wish you could read my poem and understand, That my care still remains burried under the sand! Take care of your health dear rainbow, For this angel still cares for you in the meadow! I know you won't come back to me, Hope you are cared by friends better than me! Missing the fights and the joy we shared, Let God take away them if He has plans ahead! You were the last most admired rainbow of mine, I don't need any other as mine! --Aatheera |
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hope!
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Nice poem . Thank you |
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hope!
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Very Beautiful Poetry,Really Loved it !!
As we all read Pandora's Box in childhood,Hope is the Only thing we can have to Live our life with Positive Notes!! Thanks for Sharing it Aatheera Thank you |
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A day of rest
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We have mooned the day away,
with a little cooking, chores and coy smiles. Our one day of rest comes to it's end, as you draw the curtains to catch the evening stars in the opal around your neck. We are silhouettes now, with crescent eyes to satellite and savour each other. "Tomorrow we work, tonight we dream as children dream." She says. "Come my love, let us draw near to God with thanksgiving." He caresses the necklace, kisses the bridge of her nose and pulls her close. "Tomorrow's moon is a promise away." And the moon blushed slighty red and danced to simplicity in the maiden's hour. adorable |
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