tanks, ya you bet'cha

Thanks sugar

A Blurb

Give me a simple poem
a poem for the common man
not too complicated
one I'll know he'll understand
a poem can be good without thee or thou
just a simple verse
without the dramatic pow
to the point, just short and sweet
not three pages long
composed on a cell, perhaps just a tweet
so here it is, here's my stinker
a simple poem
surely, not for a heavy thinker
rate it a two or maybe just a one
it's only a blurb
written just
for fun

Thanks Hip for your support, your the bomb

Very beautifully written Tommy.

Thank you Leigh, I value your feedback.
My Intent is remind people that whatever stress and sorrows one might endure that life is beautiful.
There are so many dimensions of love to be experienced why not try to feel them all.
peace to you this day

Thank you Tommy for your feedback is most welcomed
P.S. I am very much a woman not a nun

I lay somewhere in between

thank you 2k
I appreciate the feedback

Here it is I hope you like it. Read it slowly and let the meaning of the words enter into the deepest part of your being.

Let go, Let go
step into your
soul
Release everything from
that which you have been
shatter all that bars the way in
float into a world
of stillness and silence
a place of peace,
void of violence
no coming, no going
no after, no before
grace seeps in
shuts the minds door
here you will hear Him,
He will call out to you
I am love,
so be this to be true
tears of joy
from a love so pure
ecstasy prevail
you now endure

this is really wonderful

what a wonderful poem..so full of imagery

Thank you for the compliments Tommy, I am truly flattered

thanks Hip, thanks "G" for the read
live the joy!

can you feel it
can you feel it
the joy of life all around you
it"s bursting with promise
see it's bright hue
passionately dance
to a million songs
purify yourself
by righting all your wrongs
sing loud
so every can hear
don't hold back
there is nothing to fear
dare to open your heart
love all who are near
fiercely embrace this life
it is so very dear
rejoice, celebrate it
let out a lusty cheer
this is time for laughter
not to shed a tear
write poems, write songs
don't care what people say
for this is the beginning
of a brand new day

written like a true Celtic warrior

oh, so very beautiful

nicely done, keep it up!