hello,good afternoon

so whts up tammy

i know your trying to help i thank
but any how i wish you well
okay, if he knows what he is doing then I hope him goodwill and success, and I also hope he finds his direction because if he makes another left he is gonna wind up where he began. thanks for sticking up for him.

Tammy Love

good morning!!

T.G.I.F.

hi

just constructive criticism AND

did you know i wrote for a band called "four left time"

that is one more.

Hello sunshine

Hello. Good Morning.

Nice to see ya!!!! Hope thing's are going your way and you make lot's of money,,, Or really just be happy

Remember the past, plan for the future, but live for today, because yesterday is gone and tomorrow may never come.

This is not you. but if you feel the need to write you must.

I advise that you stop writing about things that you think will tug at others heartstrings.

Stop writing for praise and learn that rhyme is not paramount. Your writing seems forced and manufactured.

ie:

The girl was lost and so very sad
she did not know the love she had
she gave it up like a bad habit
and now she says "god damnit"

that sounds hokey and a lot like shel silverstein.

if you want to write you have to let go of structure and rules

Her heart is broken and look at her now
that man does not inhibit her now
he loved her once
but not anymore
her heart
will no longer trust a man
maybe it will
but I don't think she can

Happy friday!!!

I would hurt you, though.

What up? What is that tat of yours?