That was very very nicely written. Whomever it was written to sure is a lucky guy!



~Den

Cuz you're a doll!

LMAO, I'm glad I could bring you a laugh!



~D

PSSST. Ya CAN comment on the new poems. I'm not dead, just taking a week off from the challenge

~D

* I really REALLY appreciate your kind words and I love the challenge from my friends (and/or people I don't know). Yeah, I can be pretty complex in how I take the words, but also flexible enough to ask for a general meaning and adhere to that as well. You're a great poet and it shows me great honor that you would have such meaningful words for me. Thank You, FC- and OH I'LL BE BACK lololol

~D

Hehe, So very glad to hear it brother, its makes me feel good to put a smile on someone's face. Appreciate the feedback very much!!!!

We'll save 24 for next Friday

~Den

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Friends, I'm going to put this thread on break for about a week and see if I can't write a nice short story. I'll still reply to your comments, but please hold off on requests until I give a thumbs up. I appreciate all of you reading and your feedback very much. Just want to see what I can on the other side of the world.
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((Celtic)) , hope you enjoy


Black & White Photography

The invention of color film brought pictures more to vibrant life
But to this day, they have never been able to replace those black and whites
The shadows falling as they do; more emotion I think they show
A black and white can be transformed just by the way the light flows
Not to mention the countless boxes that retained for us memories
Of those who are long gone, but not forgotten, their faces we can still see
It’s hard to believe that so much life can be seen with just a few shades of gray
There are few things on Earth as sexy as a lady in a black and white picture, who wants to play

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

Black & White Photography

The invention of color film brought pictures more to vibrant life
But to this day, they have never been able to replace those black and whites
The shadows falling as they do; more emotion I think they show
A black and white can be transformed just by the way the light flows
Not to mention the countless boxes that retained for us memories
Of those who are long gone, but not forgotten, their faces we can still see
It’s hard to believe that so much life can be seen with just a few shades of gray
There are few things on Earth as sexy as a lady in a black and white picture, who wants to play

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

My Wench, My Wench, My Wench



You did good dawg! (In my other personaliteese: Extremely well written poem that has a great flow and flawless ending)



~D

LMAO@skinburn!!!!!

I debated the soul- thanks for the advice, it's now there

Always a pleasure my friend, you bring out the "twisted side of me the most" lol

~Den

You should love this one, FC. Happy smiles

Down In The Backside Heart

I looked up at my wife, such fear consumed my eyes
She told me not to worry; I’d make it through just fine
Tears had filled her eyes; I feared I was going to die
The ambulance arrived shortly, they didn’t take their time
I described the symptoms of my pain and where it hurt the most
Upon arrival at the Emergency room, I was scared death was too close
The Doctor ran a series of test, my blood and all my stats
The next time that he walked in the room, a small smile upon his face
There’s nothing here to worry about, in an hour you just need to flatulent
I smiled at him, as he sat down and quickly filled out my chart
Hard to believe I thought I would die and I simply needed to fart

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

Down In The Backside Heart

I looked up at my wife, such fear consumed my eyes
She told me not to worry; I’d make it through just fine
Tears had filled her eyes; I feared I was going to die
The ambulance arrived shortly, they didn’t take their time
I described the symptoms of my pain and where it hurt the most
Upon arrival at the Emergency room, I was scared death was too close
The Doctor ran a series of test, my blood and all my stats
The next time that he walked in the room, a small smile upon his face
There’s nothing here to worry about, in an hour you just need to flatulent
I smiled at him, as he sat down and quickly filled out my chart
Hard to believe I thought I would die and I simply needed to fart

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

Falling In Love From a Distance

After years of searching, patiently waiting, looking under every rock
I finally find the one I’ve searched for, finally found my soul mate
Why does fate play such cruel jokes on my heart, as if it wants my love blocked
Tell me why, I scream out loud, why must it be someone so very far away
Relations are hard enough to maintain in person, much less in a different State
You offer me my mate for eternity, but obstacles are abound
Why could we not be in the same place, why must it be so confound
They say to have patience, and the best things always come with a wait
But can you not feel my desire to be touched, by my true soul mate

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

Falling In Love From a Distance

After years of searching, patiently waiting, looking under every rock
I finally find the one I’ve searched for, finally found my soul mate
Why does fate play such cruel jokes on my heart, as if it wants my love blocked
Tell me why, I scream out loud, why must it be someone so very far away
Relations are hard enough to maintain in person, much less in a different State
You offer me my mate for eternity, but obstacles are abound
Why could we not be in the same place, why must it be so confound
They say to have patience, and the best things always come with a wait
But can you not feel my desire to be touched, by my true soul mate

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

What To Do? What To Do?

I sit here in this chair alone, asking myself what to do, what to do
My feelings run deeper than I thought they would, I’m truly addicted to you
You make me smile; you make me laugh, each other we see straight through
But yet I still have that posing question, What to do, what to do
I don’t wish to complicate your life, but I am at wit’s end, what to do
If I tell you how I feel, would that bring an end to our friendship too?
If I don’t tell you that my heart is somehow attached to yours, I’ll feel like a shoe
I get down on my knees and pray for hours until my knees are sore and blue
The answer I feel inside my heart, is the one I believe to be true
I’ll do it, I tell myself, and then upwardly I look, telling God Thank you
Good or bad, no matter how it turns out, at least now I know what to do

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

I do hope you enjoy brother!

What To Do? What To Do?
I sit here in this chair alone, asking myself what to do, what to do
My feelings run deeper than I thought they would, I’m truly addicted to you
You make me smile; you make me laugh, each other we see straight through
But yet I still have that posing question, What to do, what to do
I don’t wish to complicate your life, but I am at wit’s end, what to do
If I tell you how I feel, would that bring an end to our friendship too?
If I don’t tell you that my heart is somehow attached to yours, I’ll feel like a shoe
I get down on my knees and pray for hours until my knees are sore and blue
The answer I feel inside my heart, is the one I believe to be true
I’ll do it, I tell myself, and then upwardly I look, telling God Thank you
Good or bad, no matter how it turns out, at least now I know what to do

© Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

There is #5. So let me finish these 5, then I'll take on some more. Ty for posting, M'lady

~D