Wonderful

I can't pretend with you anymore
these bruises are becoming harder to ignore
we put on a show for all to see
our fake smiles mask the misery
they all think we're meant to be
but in reality we're just drowning
in this deep dark sea
this hatred it runs deep
resentment is what we keep

[Writers Block; Unfinished]

Haha, That is soo great, seriously

I can kind of put myself in place in this write i can relate to it.
Put some chills on me, haha

I agree with loy.
Makes you use your brain a little bit.

That's an understatement, you deserve to be a renowned author for sure.

Oh Wow Definitely My Favorite. You Are So Creative, I wish i could have half of your creativeness. This one is really good.

Lol. Thankyou. It's not reallyeant for anyone in particular just how I feel at the moment.

I fuc*king hate you.

Really very beautiful Joe. I mean it.

Your girl just don't know how lucky she is. I like reading your stuff cause makes me wish i could have someone love me that much. You are a really good Man I hope she sees that someday so you can be happy. Anyways Keep up the great work @)-->--

I really like this one. It is great.

Just beautiful and amazing. Very emotional, I can feel the pain.

I have never truly really had a valentine. =(

Thinking about how i have to go to the doctor today. =/

We always build up walls to protect us, but that fault of that is we are never truly able to get close to anyone. and sometimes that is not always a bad thing. i really like this one a lot. great job.

2-5 here

Anyone Else Out There?

Really, great, truly.

It's been 16 years and i can still hear the gunshot ring in my head
how could you dad? was it so fuc*in hard to be a man
no one understands why it bothers me so bad, but dad you were a fuc*ed up man
there's just a black hole now where you were just standing
i was only 5 years old, but i can still remember all the blood on the floor
how could you just leave mom, my sisters and me
been 16 years but you still haunt my memory
and i still cant find a way to deal with this tragedy
i pray to god every night to end the misery
i can still hear there voices screaming
but dad i was the only one that seen you do that, now can you understand why it hurts me so bad.
But im a mommy now too dad, and it makes me sad to think she wont have her other granddad
and im scared dad, me and him are going down the same path you and mom did
and every problem i have stems from your death
i try not to dwell in the past, but it's real hard
im just as fuc*ed up in the head as you were
and im so tired of being sick and tired
you were my best friend, but now your ashes lay to rest