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wow..this is just funny:P
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It isn't even V-day yet! Really, you guys are that lonely???? |
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welcome to mingle:D
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wow..this is just funny:P
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good mourning! sleep through it, that's a good way to miss it. |
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wow..this is just funny:P
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I'm the party comic of the dreaded day. I'm going to work at my old job (more of a voluntary thing for V-Day dinner), and I'm going to bust out with my "I love you!" antennas. Yep. I'll spread some cheer...but it's mainly to entertain myself. Hey! I may get invited to a party. |
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wow..this is just funny:P
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You don't need Google to search that stuff- I've been drinking Yellow Tail Merlot for most of the evening. Now THAT'S the way to celebrate V-Day alone! |
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wow..this is just funny:P
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Omg..I just typed how to enjoy a Valentine's Day alone into google search:P. Who else is with me here?
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love is....
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Pam it *is* like that Denise your warm heart... specialguy Thanks for reading :sile: (((Sherrie))) i miss you. Thanks Pam you know it's like "OOPS!" Amanda your new writing is inspiring... PacificStar "i like that" |
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love is....
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tripped unseen and unexpected this edge of sidewalk just elevated enough perhaps a carefree gait was not ready for the step when a shoe tip catches and for all the many paces practiced equilibrium simply fails put out your arms love will catch you in bottomless play balls down filled mattress softly yielding embrace of warmth and nothingness fearless with laughter safe and happy |
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open arms
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thank you so much:)
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open arms
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I was running from the truth for too long
Shunning the one person that means the most to me. Fear being the only obstacle Keeping my love hidden from you. I was playing a wicked game Yet, you continued to love me. You breathed in every lie Now with open arms, I am ready for love Breathe me completely into your world Immerse me into your pool of honesty and love Give me a new start to prove myself to you the only angel in my life Here I am, willing to do the impossible to win your love back Hoping you will see how much you mean to me Dreaming you will love me once again |
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You remind me of the ocean Unpredictable and astounding in your ways Ways that call me into your world Your words so potent I stay Presuming without you, my life would no longer be A life of aspirations and dreams Your crystal eyes seep through my soul My independence lessens after every glance. I am one step from being fully dependent on you. I awaken to the sunlight filling my room Delighted this was an illusion A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again. |
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661 people
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661:D. Outskirts of Lancaster
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You remind me of the ocean Unpredictable and astounding in your ways Ways that call me into your world Your words so potent I stay Presuming without you, my life would no longer be A life of aspirations and dreams Your crystal eyes seep through my soul My independence lessens after every glance. I am one step from being fully dependent on you. I awaken to the sunlight filling my room Delighted this was an illusion A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again. Wonderful my friend You remind me of the spring and her time Clean and glistening under mountain air Playful, carefree and refreshing coolness Wholesome among the earliest meadow flowers Your natural way an improvement over words Lost in rain appearing again in sunshine Your independence and dependence revealed In haphazard cascade among the alpine flower trail Through the snow cold dancing Leaping down hills happily into the stream Finding ocean thank you so much*hugs* |
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I like these poems.. That is, I see two different forms of writting here in the current form, I think your poem takes on several different types of poetic forms.. It goes from comparative/metaphoric form to descriptive form.. I think you should 'remove' the first stanza from this poem.. and develope a new poem with the concept of that first stanza in mind. Where as, the other stanzas in this poem seem to flow better together, and without the first stanza. I could see you making a reaccuring notion from that first stanza. example.. you remind me of the ocean.. *line* *line* you remind me of a potatoe.. *line* *line* (don't use the potatoe comparison).. lol |
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You remind me of the ocean Unpredictable and astounding in your ways Ways that call me into your world Your words so potent I stay Presuming without you, my life would no longer be A life of aspirations and dreams Your crystal eyes seep through my soul My independence lessens after every glance. I am one step from being fully dependent on you. I awaken to the sunlight filling my room Delighted this was an illusion A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again. |
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Very nice |
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You remind me of the ocean Unpredictable and astounding in your ways Ways that call me into your world Your words so potent I stay Presuming without you, my life would no longer be A life of aspirations and dreams Your crystal eyes seep through my soul My independence lessens after every glance. I am one step from being fully dependent on you. I awaken to the sunlight filling my room Delighted this was an illusion A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again. thank you:) |
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You remind me of the ocean
Unpredictable and astounding in your ways Ways that call me into your world Your words so potent I stay Presuming without you, my life would no longer be A life of aspirations and dreams Your crystal eyes seep through my soul My independence lessens after every glance. I am one step from being fully dependent on you. I awaken to the sunlight filling my room Delighted this was an illusion A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again. |
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so good
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Sleep. is that on the menu? |
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so good
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Some tomato soup sounds really good right now. What are you craving? |
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