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Fri 02/13/09 09:57 PM

It isn't even V-day yet! Really, you guys are that lonely????
I've just been surrounded by it. My friends are all talking about it already and my two brothers are planning the perfect dates for their girlfriends.

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Fri 02/13/09 09:52 PM
welcome to mingle:D

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Fri 02/13/09 09:51 PM

good mourning! sleep through it, that's a good way to miss it.
Lol, my dog happy wouldn't let me sleep past 6:P

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Fri 02/13/09 09:49 PM

I'm the party comic of the dreaded day. I'm going to work at my old job (more of a voluntary thing for V-Day dinner), and I'm going to bust out with my "I love you!" antennas. Yep. I'll spread some cheer...but it's mainly to entertain myself. Hey! I may get invited to a party. :tongue:
That sounds like a really good plan:)

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Fri 02/13/09 09:47 PM

You don't need Google to search that stuff- I've been drinking Yellow Tail Merlot for most of the evening. Now THAT'S the way to celebrate V-Day alone! bigsmile
Lol. What is yellow tail merlot?

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Fri 02/13/09 09:44 PM
Omg..I just typed how to enjoy a Valentine's Day alone into google search:P. Who else is with me here?

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Fri 01/30/09 12:10 PM

Pam it *is* like that :heart:

Denise :heart: your warm heart...

specialguy Thanks for reading :sile:

(((Sherrie))) :heart::heart: i miss you.

Thanks Pam :heart: you know it's like "OOPS!" laugh

Amanda :heart: your new writing is inspiring...

PacificStar :heart: "i like that" :smile:

:heart:


Thank you:). You're a very talented writer

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Thu 01/29/09 05:57 PM

tripped

unseen and unexpected
this edge of sidewalk
just elevated enough
perhaps a carefree gait
was not ready for the step

when a shoe tip catches
and for all the many paces
practiced
equilibrium simply fails
put out your arms

love will catch you
in bottomless play balls
down filled mattress softly yielding
embrace of warmth and nothingness
fearless with laughter
safe and happy

bigsmile
great write:)

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Thu 01/29/09 05:56 PM
thank you so much:)

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Wed 01/28/09 03:34 PM
I was running from the truth for too long
Shunning the one person that means the most to me.
Fear being the only obstacle
Keeping my love hidden from you.

I was playing a wicked game
Yet, you continued to love me.
You breathed in every lie
Now with open arms, I am ready for love

Breathe me completely into your world
Immerse me into your pool of honesty and love
Give me a new start to prove myself to you
the only angel in my life

Here I am, willing to do the impossible
to win your love back
Hoping you will see how much you mean to me
Dreaming you will love me once again

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Mon 01/26/09 06:36 PM


You remind me of the ocean
Unpredictable and astounding in your ways
Ways that call me into your world

Your words so potent I stay
Presuming without you, my life would no longer be
A life of aspirations and dreams

Your crystal eyes seep through my soul
My independence lessens after every glance.
I am one step from being fully dependent on you.

I awaken to the sunlight filling my room
Delighted this was an illusion
A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again.

Good stuff, fun read:thumbsup:
Thanksflowerforyou

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Sun 01/25/09 01:50 PM
661:D. Outskirts of Lancaster

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Sat 01/24/09 05:39 PM


You remind me of the ocean
Unpredictable and astounding in your ways
Ways that call me into your world

Your words so potent I stay
Presuming without you, my life would no longer be
A life of aspirations and dreams

Your crystal eyes seep through my soul
My independence lessens after every glance.
I am one step from being fully dependent on you.

I awaken to the sunlight filling my room
Delighted this was an illusion
A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again.




Wonderful my friend

flowerforyou flowerforyou

You remind me of the spring and her time
Clean and glistening under mountain air
Playful, carefree and refreshing coolness
Wholesome among the earliest meadow flowers

Your natural way an improvement over words
Lost in rain appearing again in sunshine
Your independence and dependence revealed

In haphazard cascade among the alpine flower trail
Through the snow cold dancing
Leaping down hills happily into the stream

Finding ocean

:heart: :heart:



thank you so much*hugs*flowerforyou

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Fri 01/23/09 08:29 PM

I like these poems..

That is, I see two different forms of writting here

in the current form, I think your poem takes on several different types of poetic forms..

It goes from comparative/metaphoric form to descriptive form.. I think you should 'remove' the first stanza from this poem.. and develope a new poem with the concept of that first stanza in mind. Where as, the other stanzas in this poem seem to flow better together, and without the first stanza.

I could see you making a reaccuring notion from that first stanza.


example..

you remind me of the ocean..
*line*
*line*

you remind me of a potatoe..
*line*
*line*

(don't use the potatoe comparison).. lol
Thank you for the constructive criticism. I'll tweak it a little.

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Fri 01/23/09 08:28 PM


You remind me of the ocean
Unpredictable and astounding in your ways
Ways that call me into your world

Your words so potent I stay
Presuming without you, my life would no longer be
A life of aspirations and dreams

Your crystal eyes seep through my soul
My independence lessens after every glance.
I am one step from being fully dependent on you.

I awaken to the sunlight filling my room
Delighted this was an illusion
A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again.

Nice writeflowerforyou
Thank you

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Fri 01/23/09 08:16 PM

Very nice flowerforyou
Thank you

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Fri 01/23/09 08:10 PM


You remind me of the ocean
Unpredictable and astounding in your ways
Ways that call me into your world

Your words so potent I stay
Presuming without you, my life would no longer be
A life of aspirations and dreams

Your crystal eyes seep through my soul
My independence lessens after every glance.
I am one step from being fully dependent on you.

I awaken to the sunlight filling my room
Delighted this was an illusion
A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again.



flowerforyou flowerforyou

thank you:)

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Fri 01/23/09 08:05 PM
You remind me of the ocean
Unpredictable and astounding in your ways
Ways that call me into your world

Your words so potent I stay
Presuming without you, my life would no longer be
A life of aspirations and dreams

Your crystal eyes seep through my soul
My independence lessens after every glance.
I am one step from being fully dependent on you.

I awaken to the sunlight filling my room
Delighted this was an illusion
A beautiful nightmare I wish not to visit again.

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Mon 01/19/09 11:48 PM

Sleep. is that on the menu?
Lol. I hear you. Insomnia sucks.

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Mon 01/19/09 11:07 PM


Some tomato soup sounds really good right now. What are you craving?
drool hamburgerdrool
Lol

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